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California Charmer - For Rene
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California Charmer - For Rene |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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California Charmer For Rene Exhaling moods dazzling through the tulip poplar Perceptive blissful hours and a notion started by Mahlar* Taking count, pouring over broadened emerald leaves Floating on contented eras, coursing with the breeze Aroma arches over the azure depths of night Such display of colors framing odorous boiling quiet Assimilates embodiments, in a docile ornamented space Simple night noises, haphazardly nuzzle place to place Lights, shades & rare possessions wave musical notes of katydids Gushing heroic energy, unfolding thoughts with emphasis Evening air crescendos drone, cleverly exceptional hours Rose wine sweetly faultless, pronounces boundless spouts of flowers Sauntering, growing themes, enamoring tassels of spring Mid-may and early June, ceaselessly fancy picturesque poppies Scenting the entire neighborhood with eternal tones of light Without an apology for interrupting, eager ponds of twilight Irregular paths worn between by an imperative spiritual brook Sending forth clear vents of infinite stars from heaven’s look Bubbling on and on, ceaselessly with moonlight connotations Oceans of moderate literature, foraging immense creations There is something supernatural about this night that bore its battle And such light-heartedness, perfuming through our windows vital Suggesting promenades yet speaks not a word, bulging voiceless Applauded by an infinite serenity, all climates eloquently absurd I have heard the katydids, & the evening peeper’s waves of notes Beginning circles round and round… Bearing passionate compositions of their own Appropriate graceful meanings charmingly transparent beauty green More bountiful then any artist’s painting ever known or seen Those are the multiple embers, from this one special human heart Inkling forever forward, curiously imaginative within her passionate art Supply of intellect, profound in amorous camaraderie Ageless poetic expressions, enslave divine and muse humanity *Austrian Composer By Lee J. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Wow, amazing imagery! I'm speechless. :[ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LeeJ A fabulous word flow...just made me spin...beautiful from without and within. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes, I believe so...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: Having grown up in CA...something intricately delicate about this feeling...thank you for flinging me back to some warm memories.... |
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nobody Junior Member
since 2003-05-19
Posts 43 |
wow that flowed really well |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
quote: I miss my poppies! Born and raised in So Cal, poppies were always my favorite flower. Have you ever seen a Matilija poppy? Enormous flower, looks like a giant sunny-side-up, surrounded by a plate of greyish green leaves. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Loved this very descriptive Write!  ARCTIC WIND |
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