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These eyes.... |
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nobody Junior Member
since 2003-05-19
Posts 43 |
these eyes have seen a thousand sights have fought on the sidelines on a thousand battles have rejected the mainstream and lived too see the pain and suffering these eyes have seen too many a night wasted all alone wishing for him wanting the affection that others have and yet can never find these eyes have seen a world too big full of disasters and hoaxes clouding peoples mind forcing their opinions to live a life in doubt with clashing emotions these eyes have seen far too much for a worthless life thats only 13 years old the rainbow valley in the sky that is my imagination and yet im gone _________________ [This message has been edited by littlewing (06-23-2003 11:54 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you know, I can relate to this in some ways...very sad writing... |
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nobody Junior Member
since 2003-05-19
Posts 43 |
thanks for replying i kinda write sad and as i said im only 13 to me it seems a little wrong but then maybe i'n just strnge.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
being a teenager is hard mine is 15 so I understand a little of what you are feeling chin up! you'll get older and be able to live your own life and make it what you want...and you will make it happy!  until then, write sad. It's good therapy...get it all out of your system. I'm 33 and still write sad, most of the time. [This message has been edited by passing shadows (06-22-2003 01:28 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I feel lots of emtiness and sadness when I look at my disappointments and failures but when I focus on my achievements and the good things that are happening life can be beautiful at times...it works both ways...we can look at what we don't have or we can look at what we have...james |
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nobody Junior Member
since 2003-05-19
Posts 43 |
thank you for your replies i was trying a different way of writing and really appreciate all your comments.... |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
I know exactly what you mean...   Kielo It's so good to be home... :) |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Yes . . . much too young for such battles as I do know them myself . . . nice writing and much insight indeed and not strange at all I think you will find many here you can relate to xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (06-24-2003 12:10 AM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nice expressions,,, A voice of honesty |
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