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She comes to me

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 06-21-2003 08:36 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

She comes to me

From out the shadow to the sun
Within a spirits sense itís done
A sighs illusion reaches out
A remedy it seems for doubt.

I see her through a veil of mist
A light from out my minds insist
An essence like a deity
A vision of validity

She comes to me desires course
Riding on Go-di-vas horse
And I a snow white wooing dove
Cooing poetry of love.

An echo of a visions grand
The wind thrown up phantoms sand
An apparition sparkling gold
An inner visions dream Iím told

But I am satisfied the goal
And pay with love the entrance toll.


© Copyright 2003 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 06-21-2003 08:49 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

A sighs illusion reaches out
A remedy it seems for doubt.


I see her through a veil of mist
A light from out my minds insist
An essence like a deity
A vision of validity

She comes to me desires course
Riding on Go-di-vas horse
And I a snow white wooing dove
Cooing poetry of love.

An echo of a visions grand
The wind thrown up phantoms sand
An apparition sparkling gold

An inner visions dream Iím told

But I am satisfied the goal
And pay with love the entrance toll.
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You keep writing like this and I'm gonna set up toll booths and make you pay with poetry.

Sy-babers this poem is so COOL..and so lovely
I am smiling at all your word play and imagery..all your groovy symbolism and personification and last but never least your internal rhymes and voca banter...


An essence like a deity
A vision of validity

She comes to me desires course
Riding on Go-di-vas horse

And I a snow white wooing dove
Cooing poetry of love.



I do so adore your minds insist...
and we all line up to hear you coo

*ww*

No matter what the differences
No matter what the cost
When words become our weapons ...
All that's beautiful is lost.

DeVante'

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 06-21-2003 08:58 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

JM,
What would I do without your dose of honey
For to me it is right on the money.
Have a peaceful, blissful day
You have sproon flowers on my way.
WWRS
LeeJ
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3 posted 06-21-2003 08:58 AM       View Profile for LeeJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LeeJ

I don't believe there is anything which fills the heart and soul as much as validity from those you are gifted to look deeply into...as if God has placed them in your path, to help and heal, to serve as a tool which takes your hand and guides...like the validy of a beautiful sunrise...the warmth of it's being, the aura of something dancing all around you in the air...you are magnitized by these people and you feel it deep within your soul...as if you have known them all your life and before...

This poem of yours has reminded me of those whom have happenstanced along my path..such as a very near and dear friend of mine...Sharon...who was indeed a living angel...and has since passed on into the afterlife....

This poem was astounding...thank you for sharing many smiles and a warmth beyond any resonable doubt....
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 06-21-2003 09:03 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

LeeJ
I haven't blushed in a long time.
nakdthoughts
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5 posted 06-21-2003 09:03 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

very beautiful and always a pleasure to  morning read.


M
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6 posted 06-21-2003 09:08 AM       View Profile for JilGirl   Email JilGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JilGirl

And I a snow white wooing dove
Cooing poetry of love.

What a loving write!

Your way of expression is
truly divine!

I was caught up in the entire write!
GOOD job!

Blessings!
Shirl

Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands.

Magnus
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7 posted 06-21-2003 09:12 AM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

I had some favorite lines from this...but
I changed my mind,  not once,  but three
times.  SO....I give up...  the whole dang
thing is very nice Sy...
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 06-21-2003 09:13 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Maureen,


Shirl,
Thank you my dear.
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 06-21-2003 09:15 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Magnus
What's that very nice worth in money? LOL
Thank you my friend.
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10 posted 06-21-2003 09:22 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


You haven't blushed in a long time Sy?

Then we haven't been doing our job with responses!!!

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 06-21-2003 09:27 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Sunshine
Oh yes you have, there I go again.
Margherita
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12 posted 06-21-2003 10:07 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Seymour this is very charming ...... now I have visions too .....

Love, Margherita

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13 posted 06-21-2003 10:11 AM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Good morning, Mr. T-Man!

Thank you for sharing your "inner vision" with us, this fine first-day-of-summer morning!

I have been saving my angel dollars just in case you set up a toll booth for those entering the gateways to your daily sonnets. And this toll I would surely pay with love, for my soul longs to read your words each day...  


EA
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14 posted 06-21-2003 10:11 AM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

She comes to me desires course
Riding on Go-di-vas horse
And I a snow white wooing dove
Cooing poetry of love.


So beautiful this morning, Seymour.  

THANK  YOU  
Ethel

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15 posted 06-21-2003 10:26 AM       View Profile for Nightshade   Email Nightshade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nightshade's Home Page   View IP for Nightshade

Seymour, my goodness, I cannot pick which lines are my favourite either, so I am putting this directly into my libary. Beautiful write on a beautiful Saturday morn. Thankyou for this start to my day. Enchantress will be along with tea....and so I offer you a cinnamon danish...Mmmmm. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 06-21-2003 01:11 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Margherita
Beautiful thank you.

Earth Angel
I know you didn't apply but you got the job of being my earth angel.

Ethel
You are a sweetheart.

Chris,
Could I do less for a cinnamon danish?
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17 posted 06-26-2003 02:28 AM       View Profile for timothysangel1973   Email timothysangel1973   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit timothysangel1973's Home Page   View IP for timothysangel1973

Loving it.....
passing shadows
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beautiful
Elizabeth Santos
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19 posted 06-26-2003 08:20 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

A dove that cooeth in the morn
Brings life, brings love, brings hope reborn
A dove that cooeth in the noon
Gives back the joy his heart consumed
A dove that cooeth in the eve
Sings anything your heart perceives

Your verse is beautiful any time of day
liz
Seymour Tabin
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timothysangel,
Thank you so much.

passing,
Thank you for the beautiful.
Seymour Tabin
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21 posted 06-26-2003 08:26 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Elizabeth,
Of all the memories of my past
Yours will last and last and last.
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One of his best. Lovely.


ARCTIC WIND
Margherita
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23 posted 11-04-2009 03:46 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Dearest Seymour,
will you ever know how much you are missed here at Pip? Those were the times, when there was your daily gift to enjoy and to study (always many new words for me!).
You are in the upper spheres now and though your spirit is very much present, we can't call you back to continue to share your poetry.
Many of those who replied on this wonderful poem of yours are well and alive, but they have abandoned Pip nonetheless. And this adds to the sadness.

Call them back will you?!

Remembering you with love and friendship, always.

Margherita across the ether
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24 posted 11-04-2009 09:13 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Margherita,

How did you know I was thinking of Sy and Marge today? But then, of course, you knew somehow, and I won't question your abilities.

It's almost a miracle that we can, with a quick click, bring to life again our beloved poets.

It's also so wonderful to hear the voices again; as while I never actually heard Sy's voice, I still believe I can hear him in my mind. Such gifts he left for us.

Thank you, my dear, for lifting his spirit this evening.



 
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