navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #27 » Paths crossed
Open Poetry #27
Post A Reply Post New Topic Paths crossed Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
gemjop
Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-06-21 06:25 AM



Nothing to plan
future back in hand
you took mine away
when i held yours.

There is fondness
in my memories
bitter entwined
each moment still had it's loneliness.

Alone in love with you
i would have battled
full figure circle
this was our last turn.

© Copyright 2003 gj - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
1 posted 2003-06-21 11:49 AM


poignant, gemma, well written sadness

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
2 posted 2003-06-21 12:02 PM


Good for you Gem..never trust a welshman..i hear they have strange fetishes for ladies undergarments too. grins
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
3 posted 2003-06-21 12:44 PM


kacy took my word........yes poignant and good
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
4 posted 2003-06-21 01:08 PM


I know this . . .
Ringo
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes
5 posted 2003-06-21 01:39 PM


Gem- Even though it wasn't a guy, I also have felt this. Very Good.

Once in a dream, far beyond these castle walls...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
6 posted 2003-06-21 02:16 PM


ah...a beautiful sad, I love it!
garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
7 posted 2003-06-21 02:28 PM


Yes, Gemma, beautiful, but sad.....
Heart Hugs, Litte Lady          
Ethel Mae

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
8 posted 2008-07-30 05:37 PM


I always Enjoy reading your poems!



ARCTIC WIND

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #27 » Paths crossed

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary