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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-06-21 09:01 AM

He Inspired

Somberly, I took this walk
my eyes just staring, not to miss.
The air surrounding touched me light,
the breezes gently giving kiss.

I thought about that face of one
whose smile would light the evening sky
that more than shone her love of life,
and shared with me, each breathless sigh.

I turned my head down towards the ground,
releasing hold of thoughts that be.
There in gold, a heart was found.
I picked it up to closer see.

Maybe a message, for this time
of loneliness, in which was caught,
my feelings pondering the "whys"
with wishes of those smiles, I sought.

I raised my eyes until they met
hers of heaven, bluer still.
Attractions held, then words were said
and there a gift, of moment's will.

Her beauty was beneath her smile,
outshining heart in hand of mine.
Reaching out so tenderly, I placed it
now in hand of thine.

Allowing moment to center on
a friendly discourse leading way
to evening of, in arms to dance.
She in mine, now memory's stay.

~~*~~

So never doubt that fate exists,
even if so short in time,
because this story told of now
his happenstance, I've placed in rhyme.
M
* thank you JamesM. for your inspiring story.

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2003-06-21 09:16 AM

Beautifully done Maureen,
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2003-06-21 09:23 AM

Hello Keth, nice to see you. James placed that little story as a reply to a poem of mine in # 26...inspired a write from me. So I thank him for that.

hugs
M

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2003-06-21 09:25 AM

MAUREEN,
I must go along with Kethry, beautifully done.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2003-06-21 09:27 AM

Thank you SY...it's not often the rhymes take off on me anymore...

hugs
M

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2003-06-21 09:57 AM

Beautiful! I so love to see how we inspire each other.
Love, Margherita

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2003-06-21 10:07 AM

Thanks Margherita.
It's such a dreary day once again here..poured all day yesterday...
and is about to today, so I am going to leave here now
in search of some light

*s

M

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

7 posted 2003-06-21 03:21 PM

very nicely written...

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2003-06-21 07:56 PM

Thanks Glenn...it was just an idea.
*s
M

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2003-06-21 08:28 PM

Simply beautiful thoughts and expression Maureen...yes, she has a gold heart and I have sweet memories of her...thank you for adding some new sweet thoughts...James

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

10 posted 2003-06-21 08:31 PM

Maureen...Very beautifully done...and made even more dear because of the inspire.

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

11 posted 2003-06-21 08:48 PM

Just perfect, Maureen. Flow was beautiful and the words just wonderful.

Patricia

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

12 posted 2003-06-22 09:57 AM

James, your words touched me in your response and my mind then took over. Thank you for both your words and kind responses.

Martie, Thank you, sometimes the inspiration surprises me.

Patricia, thank you for reading

M

SuperDave
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since 2002-09-12

Posts 48
Little House on the Hill

13 posted 2003-06-23 01:21 PM

Well done, rhyming or free you are good.

David

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

14 posted 2003-06-23 01:58 PM

Thank you Dave. Nice to see you here as I check in.

Doing my spring cleaning and gardening now, and trying to catch my life up to where it should be. I hope all is well in your world.
hugss
M

Artic Wind
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Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

15 posted 2008-08-11 02:34 PM

Nice Write Nakdthoughts!

ARCTIC WIND

nakdthoughts
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Posts 19200
Between the Lines

16 posted 2008-08-11 02:44 PM

Thank you again, AW

M

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