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Dark Bedroom

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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow


0 posted 06-21-2003 12:33 AM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kaoru

Sitting in my dark room,
smelling sweet perfume..
Calmly lingering
on which window I should stare out of.
Which star should I wish upon..

I was hardly aware
of the way you stared quite
distantly,
almost mathmatically
measured the proper distance between
each strand..
PErfectly proportioned your fingers
to comb the surface for treasures
that may have lingered from my mind..

I see my breath rise in the air
and wonder
was it ever really this cold?
Snow falls gently and
the smell of ice
mixes with the indescribable
taste,
and texture
of your smell that
crumbles on my pillows ..

Which in turn
make me dream of you every night..
in this dark bedroom,
i am starving for light.
© Copyright 2003 Meghan Armitage - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 06-21-2003 01:56 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Enjoyed...James
passing shadows
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many favorite lines here, good write, love the ending!
Ceinwyn
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3 posted 06-21-2003 11:46 AM       View Profile for Ceinwyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ceinwyn

Kaoru this is just aching, I suck at comments sorry but reminds me of my numerous sleepless  nights..

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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on the threshold of a dream


4 posted 06-21-2003 03:22 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

You paint a beautiful portrait of melancholy and missing. *S*
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Never close enough


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"make me dream of you every night..
in this dark bedroom,
i am starving for light."

I used to have a room like that....
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6 posted 03-30-2009 07:44 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Sitting in my dark room,
smelling sweet perfume..
Calmly lingering
on which window I should stare out of.
Which star should I wish upon................."

Calm and peaceful!!!


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