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SweetSerenity
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0 posted 2003-06-20 09:26 PM


You asked why I feel how I feel
So now is the time to reveal
You put a certain comfort in my heart
I feel so close even when we’re apart
Not only do your eyes I truly admire
But your sense of humor arouses a desire
There’s also the sensation in your sweet touch
That makes me crave your presence so much
When I feel I’m in an unfamiliar place
I relax and smile at visions of your face
My heart never before has felt this way
You linger in my mind every single day
You occupy my prayers and thoughts each night
Hoping you and your family are all right
When I sleep and feel ever so cold
Through sweet dreams, my body you gently hold
I try not to let down my guard
But around you, it seems so hard
Here’s something you probably didn’t even know
Your words inspire my wisdom to grow
You tell me things my heart will understand
And during this time, you’re holding my hand
Your touch always seems to make me weak
I show you my feelings without having to speak
I focus on you and put the past behind
Cause in you, I believe my soulmate I’ll find
For eternity, I want you by my side
And for that, I’ll willingly sacrifice my pride
I’ll give my all to prove to you
That the depth of my love is true
I want you to know I’ll always be here
When your mind tells you that no one cares
Now you know how I truly feel
I want your heart to sense it’s real
If you need more proof to prove my love
Look to the sky and ask God above

~A touch of Sweetness . . . . . A lifetime of Serenity~

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Kaoru
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1 posted 2003-06-20 10:28 PM


"When your mind tells you that no one cares
Now you know how I truly feel
I want your heart to sense it’s real"

Lovely write/read, ahh love

QjQ
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2 posted 2003-06-24 04:33 PM


nicely thought,,
garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-06-24 04:44 PM


This is SOOOO beautifdul. A story of
real love and this hopeless romantic truly
love it, too!!  
Ethel

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4 posted 2009-01-23 02:11 PM


this is a nice one!!!!!


ARCTIC WIND

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