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timothysangel1973
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0 posted 2003-06-20 08:58 PM



I'm over the line

Elusive and yet sublime

Searching for my mind


Please visit my website:  www.southerncountrywebdesign.com/~heart/

And support the fight against Child Abuse, Domestic and Verbal Abuse.

[This message has been edited by timothysangel1973 (06-20-2003 09:02 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-06-20 10:36 PM


"Elusive and yet sublime"

Cool

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-06-21 04:34 AM


wonderful Tima!

great write! I'm so honored to have inspired you, m'friend

Nan
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3 posted 2003-06-21 07:09 AM


Very  nice - I'm sure it won't elude you for long - Well penned, ta...
Margherita
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4 posted 2003-06-21 10:40 AM


A very very beautiful senryu!
... and also so elegant.
Love, Margherita

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5 posted 2003-06-22 03:39 AM


gotta put this in my library!
timothysangel1973
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6 posted 2003-06-22 09:48 PM


Ya'll are so sweet!

I just love meeting up with ya'll each spare minute that I get.....

Thanks for being who and what each and everyone of you are!!


Lots a love.

Tima

Please visit my website:  www.southerncountrywebdesign.com/~heart/

And support the fight against Child Abuse, Domestic and Verbal Abuse.

Artic Wind
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7 posted 2008-08-07 11:58 PM


Thanks for Dixie! or we probably wouldn't off seen this write!

Great emotion Write!


ARCTIC WIND

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