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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2003-06-20 07:28 PM



Until
~*Marge Tindal*~

~Until
These tears are spent
I will shed them tender
Quiet moments of remember
Sharing the joy of who you were and why
He placed you in sisterly heart
With memories so sweet
To be recalled
Until~

*With a tear-stained smile of remember*
My favorite photo of Mike as a young boy

David Michael Cowart
June 20, 1946 - July 3, 1980
~Happy Birthday, little brother~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
   noles1@totcon.com   

© Copyright 2003 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
skyshine
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1 posted 2003-06-20 07:30 PM


He's always in your heart, until forever.

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

Betty
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2 posted 2003-06-20 07:34 PM


This is very nice.
Betty

Patricia
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3 posted 2003-06-20 07:34 PM


Marge, you got me...trying to choke back a few tears here.

Yes, he will always be in your heart.

Patricia

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4 posted 2003-06-20 08:17 PM


Gosh Marge,  making me misty eyed...This is
so sweet,  reminds me of how I looked at
that age...way back then...

Thanx for this one..

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5 posted 2003-06-20 10:00 PM


Dear Marge:  What a sweet and charming looking boy!  I felt as if he was someone I knew, from reading your poems about him. He must have added so much to your life, as I'm sure you did to his.

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2003-07-03 09:08 AM


I don't want these tears anymore ... take them from me, Lord~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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7 posted 2003-07-15 03:51 AM



Marge~
I'm so sorry I missed this one before.
I wish I could ease your pain and dry your
tears, my friend.  I know I can't 'fix it',
but I can offer understanding and lots of hugs.
Love you,
~Me

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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8 posted 2003-07-15 05:48 AM


Marge...someday your tears will be dried, and you will see this young man's smiling face again.  For now, he is with you in heart and mind, and lives on in your tender memories.....until.....  

~~V~~

I speak from the Voice Of Experience

Paul Wilson
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9 posted 2003-07-15 07:21 AM


Marge~ Heart Hugs being sent to you " Until "...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

[This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (07-15-2003 07:22 AM).]

LeeJ
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10 posted 2003-07-15 07:38 AM


what can someone say to take this tragic loss away...only that perhaps, you are better for having him...while there...and now perhaps this beautiful precious life, has a further purpose, beyond our comprehension...though while here, the light of his being shown around...do not allow his life, his very existence to leave you with saddness...but more so...enriched in the fact that you were chosen to be his breath of life....God bless you and many hugs
Ericc
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11 posted 2003-07-15 09:34 AM


What a beautiful tribute to an enduring love.
Eric

Corinne
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12 posted 2003-07-15 10:12 AM


My prayers go out to you, lady.

What tears this poem will bring!


Core

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13 posted 2003-07-15 11:54 AM


Such a short poem to make me cry. Lovely.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2003-07-15 12:51 PM


Marge  
What can I say,

passing shadows
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15 posted 2003-07-15 12:54 PM


you know me...you got me good with this one Marge
JamesMichael
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16 posted 2003-07-15 05:55 PM


Soft words from your heart...hugs for you Marge...James
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17 posted 2003-07-15 06:06 PM


nice
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