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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-06-20 03:28 PM



Missing

I miss
who you
use to
be
to me


© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2003-06-20 04:13 PM


Helen,
Too many can relate to this.

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
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2 posted 2003-06-20 04:40 PM


I hear an echo, hollow . . .
Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
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the ass-end of space
3 posted 2003-06-20 09:38 PM


damn..
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2003-06-21 01:38 PM



littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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5 posted 2003-06-22 12:31 PM


me too Helen
God this is perfect
xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (06-22-2003 12:31 AM).]

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
6 posted 2008-08-05 05:08 PM


Very sad and emotion filled Write !-- But I love how poetic it is. The ending is a perfect Bitter-sweet ending to this poem!



ARCTIC WIND

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