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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-06-20 02:02 PM

expectation and reservation
shroud the new rose he brings,

longing to savor its beauty
as it sweetly unfolds,

finding myself instead
skipping storybook pages,

doused in red petals,
as they fall to the ground

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (06-20-2003 02:04 PM).]

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-06-20 02:13 PM

expectation and reservation
YES

the petals fall but the beauty remains

lovely Michele
xxoo

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-06-20 02:53 PM

Enjoy those roses forever long they last...

Huggums,
EA

pisumnux
Junior Member

since 2003-06-11

Posts 49
Troy, NY

3 posted 2003-06-20 03:01 PM

The first time I got my girlfriend roses, she took a picture of them so that she would always be able to see them.

"There are three things men can do with women: love them, suffer for them, or turn them into literature."
- Stephen Stills

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

4 posted 2003-06-20 03:19 PM

The memory of the rose far outlasts its actual beauty. Given from the heart, it lasts forever. Always goes with a little red vino, a box of chocolates, a little lube from the soul and a kiss!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-06-20 03:52 PM

Hey, Michele, that bklynboy has got the right
idea, doesn't he? LOL

A good poem, Michel. I enjoyed it.

Hugs

Ethel

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2003-06-20 06:39 PM

thanks for stopping by,
yes ethel, bboy is the light at the end of my tunnel sometimes

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

7 posted 2003-06-21 04:59 AM

This poem was very pretty! and I love roses especially gold ones...and rose petals! it is great to read other love poems and be inspired!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2003-06-22 12:47 PM

Nice poem Michele, and I loved your title too.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2003-06-22 01:29 PM

good write

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

10 posted 2003-06-22 02:49 PM

nicely written,,, oh yeah what a rose mesmerize

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

11 posted 2003-06-26 02:41 AM

Just WUNNERFUL!

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

12 posted 2003-06-27 01:48 AM

Can't believe I missed this one! Beautiful writing, as always.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

13 posted 2003-06-27 01:52 AM

Cool. And softly they fall I am sure.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

14 posted 2003-06-27 06:27 PM

Dried memories can still bleed if you mix them with tears.
Beautiful write.
Love, Margherita

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

15 posted 2003-06-27 11:38 PM

Thinking about this one my friend...
Expectations and reservations...

Would that be the recipe for love?
Smiles from TD

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

16 posted 2003-06-28 10:15 PM

thanks for reading and feeding me back with your thoughts

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