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garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-06-20 11:30 AM

Photo From Webshots

*o<>o*
It hurts
~~~~Very  deeply~~~~
When mean words are lashed out
Falling  whevever  they  might  fall
Especially........when done........in poetry
Something   beautiful   turns   ugly
Thrown   out   as   a   weapon
Please don't do this
It hurts
*o<>o*

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2003-06-20 11:44 AM

I'm with you on that one. Such a beautiful presentation.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2003-06-20 06:56 PM

please don't, anymore..............

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

3 posted 2003-06-20 07:00 PM

absolutely terrific!!!!!!!

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

4 posted 2003-06-20 07:03 PM

ouch....it does hurt!

Well stated, Ethel.

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

5 posted 2003-06-20 07:05 PM

I am with you and Larry C. on this one.
Heart felt write, Ethel.

Patricia

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

6 posted 2003-06-20 07:16 PM

Sweetly, simply...true.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2003-06-20 07:49 PM

Very nice...James

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2003-06-20 08:23 PM

Ethel, I hope that no one is doing this to
you....It is very sad when another person
uses a gift as a harmful object....when the
person being hurt cannot defend themselves
from the lashing out...

Here if ya need someone...

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

9 posted 2003-06-20 08:25 PM

Love you lady.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

10 posted 2003-06-20 08:31 PM

very wise words...thank you for sharing.

WindSong
Member

since 2002-12-23

Posts 313
Long Island, New York

11 posted 2003-06-20 08:40 PM

I think the picture is awesome and really really adds to the poeticness of you poem. I know what you mean and it's VERY true! Thanks for sharing such beauty. Peace. ~*~Kirah~*~

"Life is not measured by the moments we take,but by the moments that take our breaths away." -Author Unkown.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

12 posted 2008-07-26 04:17 PM

That would Hurt if that happened to me!
And also to the people that got it as well..

I like the picture with the Poem!-- Gives such a nice well-presented piece

Enjoyed the Write- touching

ARCTIC WIND

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