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garysgirl
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0 posted 2003-06-20 10:00 AM


*****
The words of others
Even though they are hateful
Will pass away soon
*****

© Copyright 2003 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
Rick
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1 posted 2003-06-20 10:23 AM


The words of others
Even though they are hateful
Will pass away soon
*****

We will join as one
to help and be a friend
for days are too short

Enjoyed this and replying, not sure about the friend, is it right?
Thanks for sharing, take care.

Sincerely
Rick

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2 posted 2003-06-20 10:26 AM


Ok Ethel:
who has been messin with you?
Seriously, ahhh I do know . . .
Seems like I always know geez
but you know where I am too
(seriously, who said these things to you?
I'll lump em upside the head)

Beautiful and bittersweet friend
xxoo
  

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3 posted 2003-06-20 10:42 AM


Rick, thank you so much for replying with your own senryu. I like that. Oh, and "friend" is only one syllable, so put "good" in front of it and it will be absolutely perfect.

Hugs to you, my friend  
Ethel

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4 posted 2003-06-20 10:47 AM


Sue, I think I'm just a little too sensitive at times. I guess it's just me.

Like I said, though, it'll pass. I won't stay down...I never do. Thank God I always bounce back up when somebody tries to push me down.
I know that you're always there, and I truly thank you.
I guess I'm just really lonesome for Gary today.  

Heart hugs to you, my friend  
Ethel

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5 posted 2003-06-20 10:43 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Ethel, this is so very true, sweet friend, I too pray that we could stop hating and get together in harmony! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

BloomingRose
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6 posted 2003-06-20 10:44 PM


Yes they do! In one ear and out the other!

Deb

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7 posted 2003-06-20 10:47 PM


It warms me the way you let your feelings flow into your work.  Well done. TD
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8 posted 2003-06-20 10:48 PM


Awww sweetie...who hurt your feelings?
Let me at'em!!
~Tight hugs to you my friend~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2003-06-20 11:19 PM


We're gathering around to protect you! Just call us Ethel's Passionsate Posse!

~ Fly high above the madding crowd!

Huggums
Linda

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10 posted 2003-06-21 04:29 AM


good job!
gemjop
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11 posted 2003-06-21 06:29 AM


Ethel Mae, you ok? do hope so. i'm having a bad time too, you're in my thoughts.

p.s i visited your poetry site, and oh its beautiful!

talk to you soon hun.

much love, gem xxxxxxxxxx

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12 posted 2003-06-21 09:42 AM


Noah,
thank you!!!  
.
Deb,
thank you!!  
.
Kathleen,
thank you!!  
.
Nancy Lee,
Thank you!!  
.

I appreciate each of you very, very
much!! Ya'll will nevr know just how much!
Heart hugs to you all....
Ethel

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13 posted 2003-06-21 09:45 AM


Linda,
Thank you!!  
.
Dixie,
Thank you!!  
.
Gemma,
Thank you!! I'm glad that you
went to my Webpages and that
you liked them.  
.
I appreciate all of you, too.....
and ya'll won't ever know just how much, either.
Heart hugs to you all.  
Ethel

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14 posted 2003-06-21 09:52 AM


A shield of true love
will always protect Ethel
from whatever harm!

My sweet friend, spread your butterfly wings and dance in joy.

You are beautiful.

Love, Margherita



You've got to love like you'll never get hurt,
You've got to dance like nobody's watching,
You've got to live like it's Heaven on Earth.

Author Unknown

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15 posted 2003-06-21 10:07 AM


Margherita, thank you, my friend. You are right, Lady. I love that quote, too!!
Hugs to you  
Ethel

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16 posted 2008-07-30 04:38 PM


Ethel,

Let's hope that people won't be as harsh as they can be. This poem speaks from the heart and deep down to the core of feelings.

I enjoyed reading this one because of the truthfulness of it all.



ARCTIC WIND

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