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RedStoneEB
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0 posted 2003-06-20 02:59 AM


The wind calls out to me
So gently
The cold air rushes
And brings with it
Love

It twists and turns
Moving up
Slowly brushing against
My lips

Giving me a kiss
I open my eyes
As the wind fades

There I stand
In the graveyard
Looking at
Your gravestone

Tears falling
From my eyes
Knowing the wind
Was your last goodbye


© Copyright 2003 Lee Hepworth - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-06-20 05:12 AM


gawd!
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2003-06-20 05:49 AM


Nice writing...james
Earth Angel
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3 posted 2003-06-20 09:52 AM


Ethereal and hauntingly beautiful...

Luvs 'n hugs,
EA

RedStoneEB
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4 posted 2003-06-20 09:52 AM


thank you thank you for the replys

my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing

littlewing
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5 posted 2003-06-20 10:24 AM


Good God Lee
now you have found your place
This is a brilliant bittersweet piece
Good for you
(the writing)
you are finding your place nicely
I am proud of you
xxoo

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Gaia
6 posted 2003-06-21 11:20 AM


Sad and chilling wind, Lee, but a very good write. I enjoyed this style from you.


Kahlil
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7 posted 2003-06-21 03:08 PM


very sensory write....I felt it
Margherita
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8 posted 2003-06-21 06:07 PM


Deeply touching and beautiful!
Love, Margherita

inkedgoddess
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9 posted 2003-06-21 07:43 PM


yes, the wind gives and takes away
very pretty words

WindSong
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10 posted 2003-06-21 10:05 PM


"Tears falling
From my eyes
Knowing the wind
Was your last goodbye"

Beautiful way to end it. I'm outta words right now, nice job. Peace. ~*~Kirah~*~


"Life is not measured by the moments we take,but by the moments that take our breaths away." -Author Unkown.

Artic Wind
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11 posted 2008-08-05 12:56 PM


This is a very Sad Write!


ARCTIC WIND

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