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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2003-06-20 02:31 AM



As the words I read, flowed through the corners of my mind, through every part of my heart,

My heart beat faster, my breath became shallow, my body tingled,our souls, they mingled,

Somehow my heart knew, it was you,
the one I've waited for, my whole life through,

Upon every word, every line, the feeling grew,
and grew,

It was magical, unbelievable, my heart had finally found its home,

Within your words, you were touching me, ebracing me, and I wasn't alone,

Days passed, hours were filled with your thoughts,
visions of you going through my head,

This moment, this magical moment was meant to be, you and me,

This is where fate had led,

My heart came to life that day, you lifted my soul from its grave,

awakened from the dead,

Miles between us, oceans apart, loves' spell has reached out to me and enchanted my heart,

With each new day, each new morning, I look to see you, to read your thoughts of me throught the night,

I am lost into you, so deep into you, that I can not think, eat , or write,

You consume me, you make me feel all warm and happy inside, like the sun shinning upon early mornings tide,

Time after time,, I read your poetry, again and again,I breathe deeply,
To feel your love for me inside each of them,

Hours pass and I want you more and more, this feeling doesn't last enough, I want you, all of you to the core,

I want to ship all my love to you,
place me inside every poem written from my heart, and ship it straight to your door,

Where together we shall be, one, unlocking loves mysteries,forever and ever more!

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (06-20-2003 02:34 AM).]

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with you
1 posted 2003-06-20 02:35 AM


"Miles between us, oceans apart, loves' spell has reached out to me and enchanted my heart,"


awwww....I just love, love sounds like you got it bad, and that's a real good thing

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2003-06-20 02:38 AM


sometimes it is, sometimes you get so much inspiration, creative thoughts, running through your head, that your pen can't write fast enough to put it all down on paper!

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (06-20-2003 02:38 AM).]

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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3 posted 2003-06-20 05:42 AM


inspiration, emotion, passion, it is all here and more.

I am honoured by you lady.

Thank you.

Goldenrose.


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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4 posted 2003-06-20 05:52 AM


Looks like some love came your way...James
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2008-02-26 07:23 PM


Wonderfully Penned

ARCTIC WIND

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