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Drexler_McStyles
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 195
Venice, Ca

0 posted 2003-06-20 12:59 PM


what drugs will do on Thursday

never did I
*explicit* the homecoming queen
or that rainbow child refugee
my priorities were in other places
even her little dog
needed my help
but I
could only fill bowls
and avoid abrasive contact
with her skin
with her spiked flippers
luckily I was running with the grain
in that particular tidepool

three lines from the cradle
will deliver me
to the grave
is this a fox I see
in the prime time seat
ive graduated from rodents
and serpents
pardon my manners
im just a bit of a hack
when it comes to matters of
calibration
or maybe not
maybe that’s just a guise
from which most would surmise
my talent base
or pool
to be insufficiently equipped
yes
more water
and you’re intellectually soundproofed daughter
I am going to the feast
and must have something
to bring
everything calls for
a sacrifice
and yours is to be no greater than mine
but its best that you
go first
I will watch from up here
near the top
I imagine
that no one is holding their breath
on that one

if you’ve read me once
you’ve read me twice
and if we’ve come that far
take my hand
from off the guitar
lead me somewhere
that the streets don’t fold over
like a geography lesson
lead me to a place
where the words you speak
arent manufactured
in my mind
but somehow come out
sounding about the same
that is the only fairytale ending
that I know
but I know it well
darting through the sketches
to consolidate the angles
chewing on your chamomile
to transfer your interests
for a moment
there are only two stripes remaining
on the dance floor
and I take them both
my feet are only good
for traumas
so a quick exit
is recommended
once we are on the outside
there are a million
and one half
more
possibilities
the starlight
costs us nothing
the toll roads
have all been liberated
even the harvest is looking
equal to the task

it is too early to get into this
everything will be forgotten
by the end of the day
but I want you to know
that my centerpoint
(not my counterpoint)
is still positioned in harmony
with yours
that the man himself
may be worth very little
but the things he feels for you
are as valuable as the diamonds
that fall
from the sky
that fall
from our eyes
in separate enclosure
for separate reasons
but which will bring us
closer to the truth  
than we ever thought
we would come

S.

© Copyright 2003 Steven Doherty - All Rights Reserved
Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

1 posted 2003-06-20 01:12 AM


..what a process you endure...good for us you can describe it...you know we all relate, in one way or another....
SEA
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with you
2 posted 2003-06-20 01:14 AM


"that the man himself
may be worth very little
but the things he feels for you
are as valuable as the diamonds
that fall
from the sky
that fall
from our eyes

in separate enclosure
for separate reasons
but which will bring us
closer to the truth  
than we ever thought
we would come"


wow....I didn't understand all of it, but this part is fantastic....

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2008-02-25 07:12 PM


lol Enjoyed it

ARCTIC WIND

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