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brian sites
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0 posted 2003-06-20 12:25 PM



butterfly wings
     can make
         hurricanes

it is said

but
   I pray
with a soft hum

that the opposite
     can be true

and that raging force
can send
         this butterfly

gently

           on it's way

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2003-06-20 12:28 PM


I will sleep
   enfolded
wombed
   within the wings


of      this...


brian sites
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2 posted 2003-06-20 12:32 PM


thank you....
smile
that was my intent....
hug you, love

littlewing
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3 posted 2003-06-20 12:33 PM


Bri?

this is beautiful . . .

may some of that wind up there
from the both of you
send my wings flying too
I needed to read this
xxoo

Janet Marie
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4 posted 2003-06-20 12:41 PM


rock her gently...rock her slowly...
yessssssss this is lovely.
*smiling at you two*

No matter what the differences
No matter what the cost
When words become our weapons ...
All that's beautiful is lost.

DeVante'

garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-06-20 12:44 PM


but
   I pray
with a soft hum

that the opposite
     can be true

and that raging force
can send
         this butterfly

gently

           on it's way


Brian, I really love this. I needed this
tonight.  
Hugs           
Ethel

brian sites
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6 posted 2003-06-20 12:46 PM


Sue?
thank you sweetie

MothyOne?
I try
I try
smile
thank you

icebox
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7 posted 2003-06-20 12:47 PM


What a very nice thought!
brian sites
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8 posted 2003-06-20 12:49 PM


thank you Ethel
I am glad

brian sites
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9 posted 2003-06-20 12:51 PM


thank you ice...
I appreciate that

vlraynes
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10 posted 2003-06-20 01:05 AM



Smiling with JM here...

This is beautiful, Brian.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

brian sites
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11 posted 2003-06-20 01:19 AM


lots of smiles tonight....

thank you Vicky

gemjop
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12 posted 2003-06-20 07:56 AM


sigh... brian, brian, brian, that wrapped me up like a blanket. yes, i believe it to be true. another for my library.
xxxxxxx

littlewing
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13 posted 2003-06-20 10:40 AM


you are always most welcome  . . .

[This message has been edited by littlewing (07-25-2003 07:11 PM).]

Ceinwyn
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14 posted 2003-06-20 03:40 PM


this makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside *sigh* makes me think on this cold rainy day...methinks I needed this thanks

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Sunshine
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15 posted 2003-06-20 03:42 PM



This...

is why you have a following...

vlraynes
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16 posted 2003-07-24 02:49 AM



...just in case 'someone' needs a lullaby tonight.


Love this, Brian.

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (07-24-2003 02:54 AM).]

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