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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-06-19 09:30 PM

Dream A Beat

do you
call my name
in your sleep
am I the secret
that you
tenderly keep
of how
your heart
really feels
when all
but touch is what
makes it real
is one lifetime
the right amount
of time
to hear a heartbeat
wake next to you
in rhyme

Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

1 posted 2003-06-19 09:34 PM

"do you
call my name
in your sleep..."

thinking that i just might! this is beautiful and heart-felt.

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

2 posted 2003-06-19 09:34 PM

Your poetry rings and sings.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

3 posted 2003-06-19 09:41 PM

Helen,
==========
is one lifetime
the right amount
of time
to hear a heartbeat
wake next to you
in rhyme
===========
It is if it's without interruption.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2003-06-20 10:08 PM

I started to pick my favorite lines.
The same ones Larry chose...

I love the title too~

OwlPoet
Junior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 17
Fullerton, California, Urantia

5 posted 2003-06-20 10:17 PM

Touching and delicate - I wonder when such moments arise..

WP

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

6 posted 2003-06-21 10:02 AM

yes

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2003-06-21 10:48 AM

your beautiful words stir something ...
no, one life time is not enough ...
Love, Margherita

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

8 posted 2003-06-21 10:50 AM

I really liked this... *sigh*

It's better to be a lion for a day than a sheep all your life.
-- Sister Elizabeth Kenny

IntoTheFlames
Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 92
Va, USA

9 posted 2003-06-21 11:36 AM

You have written a wonderful piece! You captured exactly what poetry is all about, its filled with emotions and written well. I hope to be seeing more of your work soon!

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

10 posted 2003-06-21 11:49 AM

*sigh* I've been vibing this for a loooong time

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2003-06-21 01:54 PM

beautiful and a little sad, just how I like 'em!

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

12 posted 2008-07-30 05:32 PM

Indeed, your poetry sings with tune of emotions!

ARCTIC WIND

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