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LeeJ
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0 posted 2003-06-20 08:28 PM


Very intensely developed
Warmth and contact
Exponents…younger then adults
Possibly a song…stung out across the sky
Surely something I’ll never forget, too intense

Confirming total irresponsibility
Emblematic motto within our physic mind
We drive to the very act of speech in a language
We only resisted.
Profoundly in a metaphysical world!

Were you surprised when I dropped my robe?
Embodied with an aesthetic enriching consent
I was, more then you’ll ever know!
Funny what fate and love intends?
We were true to the wide opened spirit
And that sacred stare…you know the one' in dramatic terms
and baby I still feel it
Cause I’m never alone when your not there.

Fate and voice became our profit…as your tore through my breasts
Combed my hair, took off my shoes, while we roamed barefoot
Towards a power imposed by forces beyond our control!
Way Beyond Our Control!
That madness which insubordination challenges and/or awards!

Mystic seer chose our voices, as if time would listen while
Sanding still, delightfully imprisoned in our hour glass, we two
We generated selfhood of one, without psychological constrictions
How tragically bittersweet, between the opposites
Where nature wears a facial quality…yielding a transformation
Very few have known

Standing still, in a deliberate, empowering metaphor
Our motif linked to remote depths characterized by a
Paradox of the talisman….an era we had not confronted before
Just driving and staring ahead, mesmerized, by something sacred.

We were victims of innocence, and didn’t recognize
Our happy meals…but we ate and expressed traces of them
Reading satisfaction in every whisper.

Association by the trophy which leaped into our pockets
Using the third eye to feel…what the mirror revealed
Do you remember, on your birthday, holding me there?
While onboard that Sight and Sound of an old steam paddle boat?
There were animals everywhere...
Indicating the real weapon of our imagination and the
Huge transformations, rolling off our tongues
And the clip clop of the Amish ponies…to a tale classically sung

The child’s mind is our beloved significance and connection
Look back and see, here it comes….that voice so demanding
From beneath the deepest part of our souls, which is the part
We cannot ever control…and oh how I have tried.

Kindness and in step with nature...feelings in dramatic terms
Generating no guarantees but leaving a signature
Oh my friend, do your realize how foolish we were and how
Insignificant the lines we drew then?

I knew your golden imaginations, the forms of your fears
And perhaps at the time, my childish heart paralyzed reality
Adulthood, rendering all logic ,as a cynical wildernesses to your male ego?
And then to…perhaps…in every whisper
Of those moments…I could not satisfy your oppositional posture
No more then a simple challenge…you walked on

Now and then, returning…knowing full well, you were my life
My career, so I thought…now, both of us will never know
Why did you take advantage of those feelings, why is it
winning so important to you?

I suppose, as we crop the green winter grass from beneath our shoes
Detailing every part of our male and female egos…can you imagine?
For just one moment…what forever would have been like, I do!

We were, simply children…in our over conditioned bodies and mind.
With hidden wild energy in every feral impulse, surely giving blind.
Every feminist claim of letting life go by…without one try
As we both possessed self denial…and radical misunderstandings
Of a perfect and most poignant song…which life points out
In actual letters composed by complex communication
Without reasonable doubt.

Between the sense and speech of oceans…infinite reasons & rhyme
Raising it’s eyebrows at the audacity of our meager abstract foolish minds
With limits written all over it….and a disappointment in our medium’s find
For twas a gift my friend...one of those things that happen once in a lifetime
I pray we've both learned our lesson.






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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2003-06-20 10:34 PM


:O Once again, I'm drawn in by your poetry, hoping to see more from you as time goes by.. Awesome write, yet again.
passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-06-21 04:33 AM


you've been holding back!

such talent!

I'm in awe!

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2008-07-29 11:57 PM


I agree with Dixie!
--Such Talent in words and poetry



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