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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-06-19 08:06 PM



You Are….

warm sand
next to salty spray
music in sunlight
laughter in the rain
tears tender caresses
the moon in full
and all the stars
a blazing open fire
air silkily spun
green kissed earth
a beautiful surprise
understanding sameness
tender blooms of the garden
threads complicated cotton quilt
words, words, words, and beyond

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2003-06-19 08:09 PM


And in the beyond you are all anyone should need...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

visitvenus
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2 posted 2003-06-19 08:23 PM


Beautiful...
Aenimal
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3 posted 2003-06-19 08:32 PM


Absolutely beautiful writing H

Goldenrose
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4 posted 2003-06-20 11:47 AM


very beautiful words.

thank you for them.

Goldenrose.


passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-06-21 05:13 PM


this is...well, for lack of a better word...beautiful!
timothysangel1973
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6 posted 2003-06-26 02:30 AM


Okay, that makes quite a few that I have read from you, and now I am on your trail lady!

You are awesome!

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7 posted 2003-06-26 10:53 AM


So very beautiful. *S*
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8 posted 2003-06-26 10:55 AM


Ahh I loved that! don't get me started...

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2003-06-26 11:03 AM


1slick_lady
You weave a beautiful cloak.

gemjop
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10 posted 2003-06-26 11:31 AM


Helen, ah i just love you.
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