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0 posted 2003-06-19 03:46 PM




And when my heart fills
spills, in overflow
wordless I
speak
in soul’s silent glow
love,
it’s always been you

beyond breath
my intrinsic prayer
love,
it’s always been you, there

and when it’s spilling
ever, refilling
wordless I
speak
ohh....if only you knew
love,
it’s always been, you



~SEA~



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1 posted 2003-06-19 03:48 PM


ah... nicely done my friend.. a wstful statement of love... someone should listen to the wordless then.. and hear the heart behind all this...
I enjoyed...

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2 posted 2003-06-19 03:58 PM


"and when it’s spilling
ever, refilling
wordless I
speak
ohh....if only you knew
love,
it’s always been, you

======================================
Beautiful Sea...simply beautiful!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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3 posted 2003-06-19 04:02 PM



This explains...
why I need a hanky.

This...
exquisite!

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4 posted 2003-06-19 04:06 PM


when you write of love i can almost believe again...grins love yer writes glad theyre back and a little more frequent
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5 posted 2003-06-19 04:16 PM


Beautiful, stunning,  touching...

You could not have done better than this...

Thanx Sue..

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6 posted 2003-06-19 04:29 PM


Ron~ someone should...thanks so much

Nancy~ thank you very much!

Karilea~ thank you

Raph~ believe... thank you

Barry~ super cool, thank you!

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7 posted 2003-06-19 04:29 PM


Oh, my goodness, this is just lovely!! hugs to you for this piece SEA. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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8 posted 2003-06-19 07:57 PM




(smiles) Love is meant to be such an illustrious emotion, and I don't think a sole word can describe the inevitable joy and afterglow of it! (kiss on cheek) This is most gorgeous, sweet friend, Godf Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light awlays shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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9 posted 2003-06-19 08:03 PM


Beautiful presentation and words...
nice to have you back, SEA

hugs
M

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10 posted 2003-06-19 08:09 PM


Good poem.  It spills, but it is ever refilling.  Beautiful.

"There are three things men can do with women: love them, suffer for them, or turn them into literature."
- Stephen Stills

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11 posted 2003-06-19 08:10 PM


Sue,
===================
wordless I
speak
ohh....if only you knew
love,
it’s always been, you
====================

How could anyone not know?

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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12 posted 2003-06-19 08:51 PM


my goodness this is lovely...
whats in the water where you moved to?
Something or someone has got your poetry all fired up...

Love the rhyme and delicate word weaving of this Susan.
Tis a gem of pen

No matter what the differences
No matter what the cost
When words become our weapons ...
All that's beautiful is lost.

DeVante'

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13 posted 2003-06-20 12:20 PM


Chris~ wow, thanks!

Noah~ always so sweet, thank you

Maureen~ thank you for reading me

Pisumnux~ thank you

Larry~ you’d be surprised

Janet~ you are too kind...as for the water? It’s goooood thanks very much

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14 posted 2003-06-20 12:23 PM


It wouldn't take me this long:


I would have it figured out by this time:


I'm just telling you it's a no brainer!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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15 posted 2003-06-20 12:50 PM


We're still on the same page I see.  I recenty wrote something along the same lines while in a dark mood.  Yours is much breezier.  This is awful pretty.

It's really nice to read you SEAgal~
I hope life is good!

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16 posted 2003-06-20 01:17 AM


...and speechless, am i. your heart speaks volumes, my dear
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17 posted 2003-06-20 01:30 AM


SEA...This poem left me speechless with its wondrous beauty, captivating images. ***Ivy Rose
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18 posted 2003-06-24 01:58 PM


Beautiful piece
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19 posted 2003-06-24 02:31 PM


Wordless?--You? May your SEA of words never dry up!

Luvs 'n hugs,
EA

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20 posted 2003-06-24 02:35 PM


lovely write, awesome presentation
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21 posted 2003-06-24 02:37 PM


simply stunning...love those victorian laced dresses...so beautiful your words...a very good write...
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By the sea
22 posted 2003-06-24 09:20 PM


I love it!   I've missed your lovely poetry (and you)  
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23 posted 2003-06-26 02:22 AM


Inspiration at it's finest!

Greatly enjoyed

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24 posted 2003-06-26 02:38 AM


Absolute love expressed here!
WOW! A delightfully romantic read!

Blessings!
Shirl

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Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

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25 posted 2003-06-27 06:11 AM


Excellant.....
as ever....
thank you for your words....

Goldenrose.

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26 posted 2003-06-27 06:17 AM



Susan...this is so softly beautiful.
You are really on a roll lately, and I am LOVING
your poetry.  Not only are the verses lovely, but
I know them.  You've been writing my heart.
Big hugs to you, friend,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (06-27-2003 06:18 AM).]

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27 posted 2003-06-27 06:33 AM


oh how I am pulled towards the sea...and always your poems are refreshing...that dress in the picture, reminds me of my wedding dress...lace and the Victorian era was so elegant.  Thank you as always for your lovely flowing words.  
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