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Introduction To Encores
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Introduction To Encores |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
So I stop. Though the words are there And still demand the audience of pen In effort to plead case before passing on To other realms I am weary of the same syncopation Of anti-rhythmic passages That discord even the beauty of Love Into noise… Be still and breathe Be breath and still Find the score And mark those notes too high For this my jaded ears That they might not be played See me fade? The symphony end draws near And lights are soon to rise The hurried soothe of music Into the harried rush of gone. Be alive and dream Be a dream and live If only for A little while |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"be breath and still"... oh goodness.... I think I can do that, after reading this...  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Be still and breathe Be breath and still Find the score And mark those notes too high For this my jaded ears That they might not be played See me fade? ======================== youve been writing your poetic --- off of late...and writing at an exceptional level of inspire...Im sure you are needing a break....So take one...and send that muse of yours over here...the moth will take very good care of it while you rest.  ( dont I wish it was that easy) You cant stop writing...and I cant start... wheres the balance...only the muse knows. Be still and breathe Be breath and still HAVE MERCY!!! ( you rock) No matter what the differences |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Be still and breathe Be breath and still" Beautiful Captain.. and we would all love to read your encores. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I hate it when I never know what to say...*sigh* other than beautiful... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
When words like THIS are there, we'll put the pen in your hand... stopping isn't an option. *S* Excellent! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Be alive and dream Be a dream and live I wish I could do that... I better try first  Thanks for this... regards sudhir |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
This is beyond words here! Excellent! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always love your writings |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Be still and breathe Be breath and still Find the score I've told you enough times, and of course I love this too! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Ron? Please don't stop... |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Ron, I read this piece several times when you first posted it. I was speechless...what I mean to say is that any comment I could have made at the time would not have expressed my thoughts. I thought maybe if I walked away from it for a bit...the words would come. I was wrong. But I wanted to let you know I had read the piece...countless times. I am learning so much this week, from Karilea and from you. I will never rise to your level of work. I know that. However, I can grow and, in this moment, I am satisfied with that. Now close your eyes and rest, my Sorcerer. With patience we will be here awaiting your pen. Patricia |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Beautiful words! ARCTIC WIND |
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