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In the Time of Wind
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In the Time of Wind |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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In the time of wind before the door she listened to air it was music it was lover and the sky was drizzle and stars a cover she lay on her back on cold ground holding what she found there were no words only pictures and dreams she walked across the sky with wind who had no measure and found her light within he listened to her ground then heard his own sound in her |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
she walked across the sky with wind who had no measure and found her light within Martie, my friend, I love this poem. It's so pretty!!  Thanks  Ethel |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely done...as usual. I enjoyed my friend |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
she walked across the sky with wind who had no measure and found her light within he listened to her ground then heard his own sound in her ====================== your wind whispers are lovely sweet poetess. love the surreal essence of this. Me thinks a certain keeper of the fire would love this one. No matter what the differences |
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pisumnux Junior Member
since 2003-06-11
Posts 49Troy, NY |
wow, such imagry, i loved it "There are three things men can do with women: love them, suffer for them, or turn them into literature." |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
most enjoyable, my friend... regards sudhir |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
she walked across the sky with wind who had no measure and found her light within he listened to her ground then heard his own sound in her Saying this is beautiful is inadequate... but I lack the expressions to do it justice... and it IS beautiful. *S* |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"he listened to her ground then heard his own sound in her" ...mmmmm...nice! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This reminds me of the few times in my life when I have come to the realization that there is no place in the whole world I would rather be. However fleeting the moment might have been, it was the best kind of feeling that one never forgets. Martie...hugs or being you~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just beautiful! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Every word Blues said, and this.... your spirit poems show a different plane of existence, and they show us poetry on a different plane....one filled with wonder, and a beauty that is uniquely yours. You don't just give us these, you bless us with them. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie You always amaze me.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"she walked across the sky with wind who had no measure and found her light within he listened to her ground then heard his own sound in her" Beautiful dear lady... How wonderful to see the world through your eyes... ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Unreal! |
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Canon_D_111 Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 58New York USA |
this is beyond words...so I will keep my words to myself... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
One thing I love in poetry is wind and breeze... This poem contains that which is a fave to me, and the entire poem is filled with the soft romantic verse that is your forte'... Well done Martie.. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Oooooh, you just keep doin' it! I can't say it better than Blues and Rat. And thank you for what you do, Martie. Kraw' |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Yup, Ed is right, you bless us with them. just sighhhhh. Maree  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, thgis is so beautifully whimsical, sweet friend, I think we are all children of the wind and somehow we are all accustomed to its presence and together must find that spiritual beacon in anothers heart where we can gracefully sail off with! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
beautiful title and write Martie.... "it was music it was lover and the sky was drizzle and stars a cover she lay on her back on cold ground holding what she found there were no words only pictures and dreams she walked across the sky with wind who had no measure and found her light within he listened to her ground then heard his own sound So you Martie and so poignant.....I thoroughly enjoyed the read. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Did you think I didn't feel this? or hear it? Oh, I did.... and for a while, life got in the way but I knew this was here, so I could come back, and say thank you. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Martie - your words surround me and take me to a place where my spirit is fed by the images and feelings you offer in this great poem - Paul |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, Martie...this is close to what we were talking to. You should take this one, the current one, and start nestling them into a book. Because there will be more memories. |
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