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Hold my Hand in Your Mind

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LeeJ
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0 posted 06-19-2003 06:51 AM       View Profile for LeeJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for LeeJ

Mid-morning blazon with blue skies and the colors of life
Sun-light and beauty flow a brush of bright yellow hibiscus
Somehow a small acknowledgement, catching praise
Where earthen magnetic spirit joins with body and mind
What more can I declare…
That within my pocket of passions lay pure golden dripping sap
Upon this fruitful vale boars an odor of rich perfume
There are bright growths of gentle showers, ethereal fires
Meeting and laughing once more…where a breath of significant
Brushes my fears…fuming from life
And every domain becomes
Broadened by a sure sweet song…fashioned melodious
With a generous maze…not knowing where it derives from
But…attributes the divine, is where we lay
There in, none who neither claims equal…nor finds no better friend
Hold my hand in your mind…when danger springs
There is nothing which can shade the splendors of so bright a twosome
Fixing firm abode…purging all boundaries of soul…
We two ten myriads of oceans, in air-born breeze
We lay gentlest swells of undulations, for those yet to come
We lie down into pleasant dreams…sweet hymns of musical rhyme
Peace passes through our hearts…blending a quiet place for us
Harmony blooms boundless groves…springing days to come up long
We flower a thousand voices of meanings…what could be more noble or free
We are the answers to questions restored
We pulse strong together in early morn
We are the bubbles of the largest waves
Twilight singing a overs praise
An ocean song given in pearls of faith
We are the winds that sound through the trees
Yielding ourselves to a perfect whole..behemoth
A swan like form whitened eternal skies
Where sea-winds chant sweet lullaby
Cradle my hand in your mind…weaving orchards gentile and kind
We are souls above any doubt…free the pulse to saver earth
Such delight statures and intoxicated, yet nothing can assimilate
Not even the strongest of Gods…for we are filled with the heat and flame
Of One God. Sacred flames, found within to-morrow…hold my mind in yours
My love, my dearest, I’m there with you…..forever more


Quote 'Not even a little death can knock down this house'.
© Copyright 2003 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 06-19-2003 10:09 AM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



(smiles) Awwwwwwwwwww, this is such a beautiful and gracefully romantic debut, sweet friend, He has a plan for every one of us and a special love for you to forever hold dear to your heart that non wind can ever knock that house down! This is mesmerizing, sweet friend, the imagery is just scintillating, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Lee, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lee, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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2 posted 06-19-2003 10:22 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


Welcome to Passions!  I believe you're going to find yourself having a good time as you walk the many halls of poetry and discussions.

Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

BluesSerenade
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3 posted 06-19-2003 01:16 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

What a grand entrance you've made.  
So many good thoughts in this.
I enjoyed the read very much.

*welcome, welcome*

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (06-19-2003 04:37 PM).]

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4 posted 06-19-2003 01:39 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

Wow! Welcome to Passions! a fine write!

good to have you!
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5 posted 06-19-2003 01:41 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
What a wonderful entrance you have made!
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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6 posted 06-19-2003 02:10 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Enjoyed...James
LeeJ
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7 posted 06-19-2003 05:48 PM       View Profile for LeeJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LeeJ

Well, many thanks to all of  you for your kind comments...greatly appreciate...please bare with me, as I'm new and do not know quit how to get around in here.  What kind warm welcomes...many thanks to you all.
Lee J.
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8 posted 06-20-2003 01:14 AM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

Lee
Welcome to PIP!

there you are I have been looking all over for you!

You will love it here
nice entrance
xxoo
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with you


9 posted 06-20-2003 01:19 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

"There in, none who neither claims equal…nor finds no better friend
Hold my hand in your mind…when danger springs
There is nothing which can shade the splendors of so bright a twosome
Fixing firm abode…purging all boundaries of soul…
We two ten myriads of oceans, in air-born breeze
We lay gentlest swells of undulations, for those yet to come
We lie down into pleasant dreams…sweet hymns of musical rhyme
Peace passes through our hearts…blending a quiet place for us"


oh there's more, but this stands out for me the most...excellent! Welcome
A Romantic Heart
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10 posted 06-20-2003 01:23 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

This is lovely, and welcome to Passions! looks like your finding your way around fine!
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on the threshold of a dream


11 posted 06-21-2003 02:46 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I like this very much, Lee... especially the ending! *S* Such lovely images... welcome to Passions! *S*
Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 06-21-2003 03:22 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

LeeJ
Your palette is heavy with color, enjoyed.
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13 posted 06-26-2003 02:32 AM       View Profile for timothysangel1973   Email timothysangel1973   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit timothysangel1973's Home Page   View IP for timothysangel1973

absolutely a treasure to hold onto, this one!
Artic Wind
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14 posted 03-30-2009 07:38 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Awe, so this is where the poetic LeeJ started! ~ Excellent, romantic and poetically written write!


ARCTIC WIND
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15 posted 03-30-2009 10:51 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Wow.

Thanks A.W.

LeeJ's first post?

my my my, but I nearly missed out.

She's got this mind that is like an alphabetical snowglobe.

thanks for bringing this back up.

Lee? I miss you baby.
 
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