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Rag Doll |
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Forgotenandgone Member
since 2003-05-07
Posts 52NC |
As I lay down to sleep I see visions Visions of my old life Life when I was happy and cared As I lie down to sleep in this life I fear for my life I fear the moment I hear his breath I fear that I might try and revolt and he will put me in my place My place, I have no place No place to fit in Im in my own category a toy merely a toy for him to play with Play with like I used to play with my dolly |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so sad. But it was beautifully written. Full of emotion. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Slickcme2 Junior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 11 |
HAPPY, happy, HAPPY, ahah ahaha hahaaha ah |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*wondering if slick is on medication* good write Morgan |
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Forgotenandgone Member
since 2003-05-07
Posts 52NC |
No its ok ....he is not....he just told me to write happy stuff because he does not like all my sad things... _______________________________________ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is very well written... and I'd like to welcome you to our Passions family. *S* But if this poem is true and not the product of a writer's imagination, I encourage you to seek help... it's out there... people do care... you do matter. |
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Forgotenandgone Member
since 2003-05-07
Posts 52NC |
Its not true...I just enjoy writeing stuff that relates to some of the harsher realitys in life...Its true i have been though hard times more than some others but not this kind...but thanks.. _______________________________________ |
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blackandwhitehorizon Member
since 2003-05-05
Posts 183an akward state of mind |
nice emotional poem |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Darkness comes before light....and the light will come sooner or later....when it does, the quality of your writing will make it bright indeed! About that dolly.....There's one difference, that the dolly didn't have the ability to walk away. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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