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Have I been? (intro the first of three)
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Have I been? (intro the first of three) |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods 
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HAVE I BEEN? I used to be kind Now I hate I hate so much I hate this hateful self I’ve grown From what seed Did this hate grow? And who sowed it In me? I wonder If the me I was Have been And the me I am Will always be |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"From what seed Did this hate grow? And who sowed it In me?" Great lines full of question about self. Great write.  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Broken: I think all of us question this from time to time . . . hate is a strong word sometimes we kick ourselves around a lot more than is needed . . . I know I sure do but an insightful query here. With time, you become what you allow yourself to and I do not see hate. Keep writing and smile will you? lol awesome writing btw xxoo |
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Forgotenandgone Member
since 2003-05-07
Posts 52NC |
Again that was really good... _______________________________________ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I sure can relate...I think the hard knocks in life do it to us |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hatred truly does disable the emotions and render them confused. Good write! |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
Thank you all for those replies littlewing- nice to know you can tell the future, I'll come to you when I need to know more. passing shadows- those hard knocks.. ~Broken~ |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
lol if I could tell the future I wouldnt be sitting here right now writing depressing poetry but TY xxoo |
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