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Open Poetry #27

Remember Your Love

kadafi09
Member

since 2003-06-17

Posts 143
California, United States

0 posted 2003-06-18 08:59 PM

all this time we've been together/
i've felt strong, like i could handle the stormy weather/
with you, strong I stand/
i feel fortunate that i can be your man/
for this and everything I thank you/
and tell you that i'll always respect you/
love you/
hug you/
do it all like a man's supposed to/
i'd bust my guns if it means i'd protect you/
for you i'll do it all/
i'd rather die than see our love fall/
foremost of all, remember your love/
remember me when you feel like there is no Man above

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-06-18 09:07 PM

Very sweet and stunning post! Love is a very strong emotion.

kadafi09
Member

since 2003-06-17

Posts 143
California, United States

2 posted 2003-06-18 09:09 PM

thanks.
i wrote it for my girlfriend.
i love ur stuff too.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-06-19 02:49 AM

I was kind of thrown by all the / at the end of lines but overall good write

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2008-02-23 11:19 AM

Lovely!

ARCTIC WIND

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