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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-06-18 07:00 PM



Echo In Reply

I write the words
to be your song
so you can sing
me all night long
sweet printed wine
you are my ink
my thirst alone
quenched in your drink
caress this page
it is my skin
trace upon where
my heart has been
taste my words
they are my lips
wear the kiss
within each script
yes, I have
touched you now
touch is as deep
as you allow

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Kaoru
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1 posted 2003-06-18 07:04 PM


"I write the words
to be your song
so you can sing
me all night long"

Wow, this poem is amazing! Beautifully written. Thank you for sharing this!

Krawdad
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2 posted 2003-06-18 07:33 PM


I am speechless . . .


nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2003-06-18 08:06 PM


very nice Helen... I love how you write
*s
M

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Gaia
4 posted 2003-06-18 08:18 PM


DANG! this is fantastic, both the message and the presentation.
Patricia
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5 posted 2003-06-18 09:35 PM


This is incredible.  I seriously would have to quote the whole verse if I dare attempted to quote my favorite lines.

Amazing, simply, amazing!

Patricia

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6 posted 2003-06-18 09:39 PM


Perfect in every way...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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7 posted 2003-06-19 02:48 AM


nice one, girlfriend
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8 posted 2003-06-19 09:56 AM


enjoyed
Artic Wind
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9 posted 2008-02-23 12:14 PM


Very Well Written

ARCTIC WIND

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