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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-06-18 05:32 PM


A translucent hand grasps
no mere heart I tap
upon the glass that covers the heaven's..
So far fetched and between the
nothing I've gained.
I prayed to open space and hoped for a life
to come forth and spread me open
to see what's inside..
A breeze calmly melts away at
the iridescent light that shines
between my fingers where your hands used to
reside.
And somewhere the tears confined my will
to survive.
I made a vow to never tell
what makes me real against the ideal..

© Copyright 2003 Meghan Armitage - All Rights Reserved
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-06-18 05:47 PM


While I'm not sure what's happening in this, it left me with a chilling feeling of great loss, yet a sense of acceptance and a resolve to go forward.
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2003-06-18 05:54 PM


Midnitesun took the words right out of my mouth!

Warm hugs,
EA

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displaced
3 posted 2003-06-19 01:58 PM


wow...sad but hopeful
Artic Wind
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4 posted 2008-02-23 12:34 PM


Very Hopeful Indeed

ARCTIC WIND

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