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JediRaver
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since 2002-08-16
Posts 23
ATL, GA, USA

0 posted 2003-06-18 02:42 PM



May you soar with angels
upon the starry skies of the somber night
and dream of petals surrounding you
so soft as the tender touch
of the ones you love...
cradled in the echos of euphoria
and the joys of eternity...

May you soar with comets
upon the starlight beams of the somber dusk
and dance upon the marble halls inviting you
to smile for a thousand years
with the ones you love...
cradled in the hopes of dreams...
and soaking in a constant bliss.

May you be with me for all of time
I need your touch to see the light
I need your kiss to resurrect my life
and become detached to this cruel world
just you and me
in days of now
and days of lore
I need your Love...
forevermore!!

-Jedi

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El_Campeador
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since 2003-01-29
Posts 761
Ohio, USA
1 posted 2003-06-18 02:43 PM


Lovely!

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

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2 posted 2003-06-18 03:06 PM


You know - I am so sorry I have not read your work before this was fabulous and if I may share this with my heart, I have a friend I wish to recite this too as well that is an angel at this time.
Edder
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since 2003-04-02
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3 posted 2003-06-19 01:10 AM


gonna push this one back to the top...it deserves a read.
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2003-06-19 01:41 AM


just gorgeous!
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
5 posted 2003-06-19 01:43 AM


Very very nicely done!
Ariana
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since 2000-10-08
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Orlando, Florida
6 posted 2003-06-20 02:35 PM


This is absolutely beautiful.  Thank you for sharing.

                   Ariana

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
7 posted 2008-03-02 03:33 PM


Ahhh Lovely Prayer!

ARCTIC WIND

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