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RedStoneEB
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0 posted 2003-06-18 09:30 AM


told you id put up a new poem when i thought of one hope its ok thanks_

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       All the times I held you
              In my arms
     I wondered if you’d ever leave
          Or if id get to say
                Goodbye

         That night you lay crying
          I held you in my arms
                As you slept
             I warmed your soul

                 Wishing that
                 I never left
                 Wishing that
                 Id never died

                 Guess it was me
                That had to leave
                   Least I got
                  To say goodbye…

                 The angels came
                       And
                    Carried me
                   To my lasting
                   Resting place

                In the heavens above…

[This message has been edited by RedStoneEB (06-18-2003 09:32 AM).]

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littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-06-18 10:06 AM


Lee:

I do hope you are speaking of peace here
lol
But I do relate to this more than you will ever know
xxoo

RedStoneEB
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2 posted 2003-06-18 10:08 AM


its a poem about a guy not wanting his gf to leave him by dying and he happens to die and he wants to say his last goodbyes before he moves on to the heavens above to be in peace and wait for her to join him

my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-06-19 02:28 PM


this is so sad
garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-06-19 02:31 PM


This is sad to me, too.  
It may be fiction, but it feels real.

"To be in love with love is truly to love".....by Paladin
~with heart hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

El_Campeador
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since 2003-01-29
Posts 761
Ohio, USA
5 posted 2003-06-19 04:23 PM


Goodbyes can be hard, but it can be harder when you don't get a chance to say goodbye...

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

NickTofteland
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 74
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6 posted 2003-06-19 06:15 PM


It is human nature to desire closure... Touching write.

Psalms 20:7 "Some trust in chariots and some in horses, but we trust in the name of the Lord our God."

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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7 posted 2008-02-24 04:57 PM


Enjoyed the Write!

ARCTIC WIND

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