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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2003-06-18 04:28 AM


Riding into the breeze,wind blows through my long hair and my horses mane.

Many leagues i have traveled and to this verdant green land once more,i have come to, i can leave behind my pain.

Across the grassy valleys, i see you stumbling and falling until you fall to the ground.

Quickening my horse, i gallop to you, dismount.
You are motionless and silent, you make not a sound.

Turning you gently over, for the first time, i see your face.
My eyes ache at the sight of your beauty, i touch your cheek, you are cold and weary.

Wrapping my cloak about you, i pick you up and carry you to my castle,to my life solitary.

Days pass by, my vigil does not cease.
Then for the first time, i see you open your dark, deep devouring eyes,slowly.

Touching your pale hand,you are warm at last.
Stooping i kiss your lips as you lay in gold and silver silk sheets,smiling happily.

Weeks go by and your strength returns once more.
Strolling through my walled garden, we pluck sweet scented oranges,pears and quinces.

Studying the aspect of your face,you are the rose of summer.
Clad in white silk and serene blue headress, you are my princess.

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2003-06-18 04:29 AM


ah, this is beautiful, she will love this!
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2003-06-18 06:15 AM


My dear sweet prince, I await for thee, long have I waited for your arrival, days have no end,
Come my love, kiss thy hand, thy lips, let me feel thy tender kisses as soft as a dove,
embrace me, hold my heart close to yours,
let me run my fingers slowly around your face, through your hair, for I am your love.
My love, come and look deeply into thine eyes, feel the love you seek, let it capture thy heart like a locket without a key.
Let our souls collide, touching, breathing, melting together as one, my love, your words
astound me, I am at a loss, for to know the depths of my love you, you can see it in my eyes, feel it when we touch. I am yours, my sweet, and our days will have no end, for you have bestowed on me loves' truest honor,
you, my love,have rescued my heart, this princess awaits and I carry your heart with me, along with the only key.....come love, and rescue me.... love,A Romantic Heart


[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (06-18-2003 06:48 AM).]

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
3 posted 2003-06-18 09:07 AM


OMG Phil - what a beautiful
sentiment to Millette!

beautiful you guys . . .
medievel at its best
xxoo

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia
4 posted 2003-06-19 11:17 PM


Absolutely breathtaking!

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
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5 posted 2003-06-19 11:40 PM


siiiigh!! I wish I could find this simply breathtaking

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
6 posted 2003-06-20 01:03 AM


I had to come back for another breath of you! and the after reading I am breathless again!
Goldenrose
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7 posted 2003-06-20 05:58 AM


thank you everybody, kind words do inspire me.

ARH you are welcome the most.

Goldenrose.


Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
8 posted 2003-06-20 09:23 AM



I am blown over by your romantic poetry! This one has got to right back up for more reader enjoyment! I'm going to be on the look out for more of your writing! Oh, yes I am!

--and ARH's reply was simply superb!

This post almost melted my monitor--but it did manage to completely melt my heart!

Hugs for two romantic hearts!
EA

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
9 posted 2003-06-20 09:56 AM


...*SIGH*...

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