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topsyturveychick
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0 posted 2003-06-18 01:47 AM


Say you miss me,
Like I miss you.
Say you need me more than anyone else,
Like I need you.
Say you'd cry if I left you,
Like I'd cry if you left me.
Say you'll make it better,
Like I feel when you're around.
Say you'll do all you can to make bad things go,
So I'll always feel safe with you.
Say that true love is just once in a life time,
Like the true love I found in you.
Say love can move mountains,
Lik ethe one I moved for you.
Say that I'm the one for you,
Like you're the one for me.
But most of all
Say you love me,
Like I love you.

I asked God how much he loved me...
He said this much...
And streched out his arms and Died.

**Sunshine**

© Copyright 2003 Ashlynn C - All Rights Reserved
Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2003-06-18 01:54 AM


Cool poem It's expressing a great need, and that's an essence worth capturing.
Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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2 posted 2003-06-18 02:01 AM


that hits right here*points to heart* very moving it made me think how i wish my ex wanted me like that. good write

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2003-06-18 04:05 AM


great write, enjoyed.
I'm not sure I've seen you lately, and don't know if I welcomed you when you came...come around more!

Welcome to Passions!

[This message has been edited by passing shadows (06-18-2003 04:06 AM).]

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2003-06-18 02:05 PM


Say, say, say...enjoyed...James
Artic Wind
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5 posted 2008-02-22 07:24 PM


Love the Name!

ARCTIC WIND

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