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but what have you written lately?
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but what have you written lately? |
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visitvenus Member
since 2002-12-30
Posts 101PA, USA 
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words from the heart words from the soul must they be so telling? must they give you away? speak the truth speak the emotion just once can't you make believe? just once can't it not be you? inner secrets bared outer image blown but maybe you won't be recognized? but what have you written lately? |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Cool poem! I enjoyed it very much.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thought-provoking write |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Um... I'll be doing a sonnet... soon...  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
. . . was thinking of iambic tetrameter myself . . . thanks for the reminder lol xxoo |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Oh no...you got me thinking. I can be anything I want to be in my poetry, right? Nah. No truth in that statement. For it is my creation and I am in it, and they will know, I can not hide the emotion in writing. Yes, they will know. Well done. Patricia |
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visitvenus Member
since 2002-12-30
Posts 101PA, USA |
Thanks all! I wasn't sure I liked this one myself, but it has started to grow on me (then again, maybe I just need a shower) -Venus |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Write! ARCTIC WIND |
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