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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2003-06-18 12:19 PM


girl likes boy
boy likes another
girl envys the other
the other is oblivious
the other doesnt see the boy
just like the boy doesnt see the girl
the boy chases the other
the girl chases the boy
its a never ending circle
girl likes boy
boy likes another....

© Copyright 2003 Chelsea - All Rights Reserved
Foxyoasis
Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
1 posted 2003-06-18 12:20 PM


very nice write,and so very true

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


topsyturveychick
Member
since 2003-01-19
Posts 57
Bris,QLD,Aus
2 posted 2003-06-18 12:22 PM


Heya, great poem...love the neverending circle.  It's all so true...boys suck...until u fall in love that is..eheheeh.

I asked God how much he loved me...
He said this much...
And streched out his arms and Died.

**Sunshine**

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2003-06-18 04:27 AM



littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
4 posted 2003-06-18 10:21 AM


Chelsea:

ahahaha you have just described my life
lol
nice job
xxoo

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2003-06-18 03:49 PM


Yes but if this is true one day you'll be the another...James
Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
6 posted 2008-02-22 08:45 PM


Sometimes that's what happens!

That really sucks

ARCTIC WIND

byski
Member
since 2006-01-26
Posts 235
Alberta, Canada
7 posted 2008-08-15 01:49 AM


Sometimes I wonder what would happen if that boy would change his perspective. It is so easy to overlook the truly meaningful things in life.
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