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Florida Summer Dawn
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Florida Summer Dawn |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Sea Erns flutter overhead just caressing the palm trees below in the Florida summer dawn. Crystal blue waters crest and free-fall onto white sands. Sand crabs scuttle across on their way to nowhere. My heart lays silently upon a warm, tropic breeze carried to a place of gentle love. Like a newly, unfolded frond... knowing this place is temporary, a short pause in the always moving journey of my life. I am, at once, ready to stay put; yet eager to return to what love and life have mapped out for me, to return to what is everyday, what is a miracle. |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
that was very nice,very nicely describe. its like i was there  Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
hmmm that was beautifull, thank you for sharing that poem |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice descriptive writing...James |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ivy: me too - feel like I am stuck in mud nice writing xxoo |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sea Erns flutter overhead just caressing the palm trees below in the Florida summer dawn. Crystal blue waters crest and free-fall onto white sands. Ivy, I'm glad that you enjoyed.....  Aren't our beaches beautiful? I think so, too!! Ethel |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hmmmm...great poem for the imagination cause here in all of MA, it's raining, dreary and cool! I thank you for transporting me to a tropical scene this morning. Huggles ... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Like a newly, unfolded frond... knowing this place is temporary, a short pause in the always moving Ivy Rose~ Loved those lines, and the piece of paradise you have written here. I am so glad I didn't miss this pretty poem of yours. Thank you sweet lady poet! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
There you are!  Your descriptive writing appeals to me so very much. Thanks for the trip to the sunny Florida beach! I needed that! Luvs 'n hugs, EA |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ivy Rose, this is as soft and delicate as the tropical breeze itself. Love the vision it gave me.. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write |
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joyfull girl Junior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 15 |
oh beautiful words can make such an impact on people.... thank you for this it is wonderdful.... it reminded me of the end of a vacation when you are happy you were there but sad to go back to "real Life" -Joy |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ivy Rose - Now you wrote my feelings, how did you know? I know these words exactly... BC |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Yes, it's a nice place to visit but I wouldn't want to NOT live here!!  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Beautifully Written! ARCTIC WIND |
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