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Foxyoasis
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0 posted 2003-06-17 11:59 PM





solitude is nice
dark angels surround my side
no place to hide no
this is my life im used to
alone by myself to die

trying out the tanka form of poetry,so dont be to hard on me hehe

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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1 posted 2003-06-18 12:09 PM


This is different, but definately cool.
Foxyoasis
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2 posted 2003-06-18 12:15 PM


welp different is good that is what i am always was,and will continue to be LoL thanks

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


exhale
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3 posted 2003-06-18 12:25 PM


hmmm i completely agree different if definitly good awesome poem!!
topsyturveychick
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4 posted 2003-06-18 12:25 PM


Heya...very cool.  Don't really know the style of writting but I like it heaps.  U've really put alot of thought into it and it's easy to see that.

I asked God how much he loved me...
He said this much...
And streched out his arms and Died.

**Sunshine**

Foxyoasis
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5 posted 2003-06-18 12:30 PM


the style of writting is a tanka,where it has 5 lines and consits of 5-7-5-7-7 syllbles

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-06-18 04:27 AM


solitude is nice, yes
Artic Wind
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7 posted 2008-02-21 02:47 PM


Solitude is nice indeed!

ARCTIC WIND

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