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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2003-06-17 10:39 PM


Alayna Marie
Soon you will be here
In a day or two
You will see a world so new

It is not gonna look
Like what it did in your mother
it will be busy
And full of new color

At first you will not like it
And you will cry
But once you see your mother
And father
You will be calm

Then you will feel the warmth
Of your mother
As they lay you on
Here breast
And content you will be
Being so close to her

Alayna Marie
Soon you will be here
With family to share
In your arrival
My sweet niece

Cold hands means a warm heart

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ThunderMage
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1 posted 2003-06-17 10:40 PM


Too true... life begins as something so strange and becomes what it is now.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
2 posted 2003-06-17 10:43 PM


Very cute poem.
topsyturveychick
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3 posted 2003-06-17 10:51 PM


My sister miscarried a couple weeks ago. This poem brings tears to my eyes to think of how much I'll miss out on that little neice or nephew.  Thankyou...it makes me greatful for life.  Life it's self is so precious.

I asked God how much he loved me...
He said this much...
And streched out his arms and Died.

**Sunshine**

serenity blaze
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4 posted 2003-06-17 10:51 PM


There's magick in the eyes of the innocent.

Hugs, Julie. You are going to be a wonderful and very loving Aunt.

garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-06-17 11:03 PM


Julie, this is so sweet. This little
baby girl is very lucky to have a
sweet, loving Auntie like you.
I pray that your sister's delivery goes
really good, Julie.
Hugs  
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-17-2003 11:04 PM).]

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6 posted 2003-06-17 11:51 PM


Wonderful welcome poem, Julie!

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

Artic Wind
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7 posted 2008-02-21 02:39 PM


CUTE!

ARCTIC WIND

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