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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2003-06-17 08:48 PM



~*~

Tears fall
Like raindrops,
Sliding down
My cheeks.
Rivulets
Of salty streams
Coursing down
In streaks.

I feel so lost
And empty,
I've lost sight
Of Godly Light.
It's time to
Burn a candle,
And have it
Shining bright.

At times like this,
When lonely,
And drowning in
My sorrows,
Candles lift my
Spirits,
By lighting up
My morrows.

~*~


© Copyright 2003 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-06-17 08:49 PM


What an awesome write, I really felt this one. It's poetry like this that we seem to pour our souls out into. Amazing what words can become, huh?
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2 posted 2003-06-17 08:51 PM


Awww, Linda, I do hope all is well with you dear lady. This sounds so sad. I am lighting a candle with you right now! hugs, Chris
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3 posted 2003-06-17 08:52 PM




(big hugggssssssssss) Oh Linda, this reminded me so much of that new Foo Fighters song "Times Like These"

"It's times like these you learn to live again
it's times like these you give and give again
it's times like these you learn to love again
it's times like these time and time again."


(big hugggssssssss) This is a wonderful message of compassion and caring, sweet friend, you are truly our resident angel undercover, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-06-17 09:20 PM


Kaoru ~

Your thoughtful words are appreciated. Thank you.

Warm hugs,
EA

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5 posted 2003-06-17 09:21 PM


Chris ~

I do believe my world seems brighter with you lighting a candle for me! You are such a caring soul.

Loves 'n hugs,
Linda

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6 posted 2003-06-17 09:24 PM


Noah ~

"resident angel undercover"-- You are such a sweetheart!--but actually, I believe that YOU are the true angel of Passions!

Lovin' huggums,
Linda

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7 posted 2008-02-23 12:41 PM


Lovely Write and such Power in words!
Lovely poem EA!

ARCTIC WIND

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