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NickTofteland
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0 posted 2003-06-17 07:19 PM


When Sol expires in crimson fire,
And daylight shadows flee.
When starlight weaves a tapestry,
Across an endless sea.
When moonlight filters from on high
To cast its' eerie glow,
To guide me through this darkened sphere
As on my way I go.
Then I am happy in my world,
And with myself content.
For I will cherish such a night,
Until my life is spent.

Psalms 20:7 "Some trust in chariots and some in horses, but we trust in the name of the Lord our God."

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1 posted 2003-06-17 07:22 PM


Sweetness, what a great poem
Goodknight
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2 posted 2003-06-17 07:45 PM


Great poetry Nick - Paul
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3 posted 2003-06-17 07:49 PM


Nick,  a very good poem with exceptional
flow.  Nice write,  very nice.

BluesSerenade
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4 posted 2003-06-18 07:07 PM


When moonlight filters from on high
To cast its' eerie glow,
To guide me through this darkened sphere
As on my way I go.

The feelings you convey are lovely
as well as the view of the sea that you've painted with words.

Oh, and before I forget, nice tie Nick~  



passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-06-19 02:59 AM


beautiful!
inkedgoddess
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6 posted 2003-06-19 07:04 AM


heavenly words
Toerag
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7 posted 2003-06-19 07:48 AM


Well lookie here! Nice write there Knique....well done
El_Campeador
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8 posted 2003-06-19 08:31 AM


Your choice of words is excellent; it created a clear picture in my mind. Good write.

~El Campeador

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

Artic Wind
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9 posted 2008-02-23 12:06 PM


Beautifully Written!

ARCTIC WIND

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