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Summer Lies Ahead
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Summer Lies Ahead |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
The air around us is close...grown heavy with the cloak of our desire. We cut through this by the sharpness of our breath. And yet the blanket falls to the greater weight of passion. The air grows thicker. Our breath...sharper. This moment belongs only to heat. And still... the summer lies ahead. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I believe that the heat of the coming summer will pale in comparison to what goes on under your blanket!  Love and Light, Linda |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
I agree with Linda!  Beautifully sensual and spiritual... and the heat of summer rises to your touch. You take the fire of the Sun itself and burn the pages with your passionate words; they melt like honey... and we drink it all in, savoring each and every golden word. Aaaahhh... delicious to the mind and soul. Thank you for sharing... I love you, Moca [This message has been edited by cinnamongirl (06-17-2003 05:07 PM).] |
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Laqe Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 72Michigan, US |
Very passionate, I love this piece. A beautiful parallel. .Echo. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This moment belongs only to heat. And still... the summer lies ahead. Like they said, Eric...you don't need summer or a heater for warmth!! "To be in love with love is truly to love".....by Paladin |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Eric, this is beautiful, sweet friend, yep, even during the coldest winter you can find warmth just holding that special smile close and wearing it like a velvet blanket! (big hugggsssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is excellent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wow Eric! Beautiful as usual...much enjoyed. ~Hugs~ |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Oh, Ericc. Wonderful...ooooooooo so wonderful. Sorry, you got me speechless. Patricia |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You could melt a hole in the arctic ice with your words ... the atmosphere holds the color of passion .... and summer, well summer has still to come .... wherever your words reach. Love, Margherita  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
The air around us is close...grown heavy with the cloak of our desire............................." Wonderfully Penned.. ARCTIC WIND |
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