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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2003-06-17 03:30 PM


“WE COULD SHARE”
~~~~
I wonder why tears fall
from one so gentle,
how they rush it seems
from out of nowhere,
perhaps a heart broken
that’s not been healed,
seems like something that
we could share…
~~~~
Bill Charles

© Copyright 2003 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-06-17 03:32 PM


OhBill~
How perfectly beautiful~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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2 posted 2003-06-17 03:37 PM


Wow...this is beautiful.
Eric

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3 posted 2003-06-17 03:41 PM


What a caring and tender heart you have--and you express it so poetically...

Gentle hugs for a gentle soul,
Linda

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4 posted 2003-06-17 06:54 PM


that will do it ever time bill........what else could it be
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5 posted 2003-06-17 07:02 PM


The wish and hope of a tender soul.  Soft
as ever.  Thanx BC

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6 posted 2003-06-17 08:06 PM




(big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I know this feeling ever so much and this sentimental touch is bound to bring such comfort and bliss forever to your dream love! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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7 posted 2003-06-17 08:48 PM


Lovely Bill. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Nan
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8 posted 2003-06-17 09:02 PM


There ya go again, BCI...
Enchantress
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9 posted 2003-06-17 09:39 PM


Very tender write Bill...
~Smiles & warm hugs~

Ivy Rose
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10 posted 2003-06-17 09:53 PM


Bill...This is one of your most tender and gentle poems. How often we just need to share our tears, our broken heart with one who understands what we are going through.  That is a dream many of us share in...finding someone to be gentle and tender with or someone to be gentle and tender to.
Anyway...a superb poem that truly shows your heart. ***Ivy Rose

Patricia
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11 posted 2003-06-17 10:49 PM


Thanks, Bill.  But you really don't know what you got yourself into by posing that question to me...Maybe we could share?

Holy smokes, could I share some broken heart stuff with you.  LOL

I guess I have before because I know it's shown up in my verses here.

This is wonderful, Bill.  

Patricia  

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12 posted 2003-06-17 10:52 PM


This poem bought tears to my eyes. Great poem Bill.

I asked God how much he loved me...
He said this much...
And streched out his arms and Died.

**Sunshine**

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13 posted 2003-06-17 11:10 PM


Bill, this is such a sweet
and tender-hearted poem.
Thanks for being you.  

"To be in love with love is truly to love".....by Paladin
~with heart hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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14 posted 2003-06-18 03:44 AM


oh Bill as always a heart moving gem from your hand....beautiful!


Charisma

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15 posted 2003-06-18 03:58 AM


yes, we could
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16 posted 2003-06-18 07:22 PM


nice
ethome
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17 posted 2003-06-19 07:52 PM


Nicely done Bill......great searching expression.
Margherita
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18 posted 2003-06-20 12:25 PM


Words like a caress that wipe away tears ...
so beautiful.
Love, Margherita

Ariana
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19 posted 2003-06-20 02:33 PM


BC

If only broken hearts could open up to share the hurt feelings, then and only then would they heal and the tears would stop.

            Ariana

littlewing
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20 posted 2003-06-20 02:41 PM


Bill:

are you reading my mind again?

Oh, do I know this well
too well
xxoo

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21 posted 2008-03-02 03:34 PM


Lovely!

ARCTIC WIND

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