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Hockeychick19
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In this world I canít see or speak,
My mind goes blank,
The air grows heavier,
Silence sings,
As my salty tears sting.

What has come over me,
Where is the light,
My body is weak,
I know I canít win this fight.

As evil lurks inside,
The devil takes away my pride,
This is undeniable,
And all my cold heart can take.

The choice is no longer mine,
Nothing can reach me in time,
I am now his in this unknown world,
Donít save me,
Enslave me.
© Copyright 2003 Kelly Gambon - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 06-17-2003 04:12 PM       View Profile for skyshine   Email skyshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit skyshine's Home Page   View IP for skyshine

This is very sad...I hope happier times come your way soon.

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

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2 posted 06-25-2003 04:25 PM       View Profile for QjQ   Email QjQ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for QjQ

nicely thought,,,  and expressed...

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

Ericc
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3 posted 06-25-2003 05:11 PM       View Profile for Ericc   Email Ericc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ericc

Very moving.
Eric
martina
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4 posted 06-25-2003 08:29 PM       View Profile for martina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for martina

YO well thought out keeping writing u are good


          MARTINA
Hockeychick19
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5 posted 06-25-2003 09:28 PM       View Profile for Hockeychick19   Email Hockeychick19   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Hockeychick19's Home Page   View IP for Hockeychick19

Thank you all for your kind words. The world as we know it has a lot of unknowns.

~Kelly~
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"Donít save me,
Enslave me."     Very powerful words there!

I really liked it!
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very touching writing
Hockeychick19
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Thank you Timothysangel1973 and Passing Shadows I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-)

(((hugs)))
~Kelly~
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9 posted 09-07-2009 12:07 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Very tender write, sad.


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