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Hockeychick19
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0 posted 2003-06-17 03:29 PM


In this world I can’t see or speak,
My mind goes blank,
The air grows heavier,
Silence sings,
As my salty tears sting.

What has come over me,
Where is the light,
My body is weak,
I know I can’t win this fight.

As evil lurks inside,
The devil takes away my pride,
This is undeniable,
And all my cold heart can take.

The choice is no longer mine,
Nothing can reach me in time,
I am now his in this unknown world,
Don’t save me,
Enslave me.

© Copyright 2003 Kelly Gambon - All Rights Reserved
skyshine
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1 posted 2003-06-17 04:12 PM


This is very sad...I hope happier times come your way soon.

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

QjQ
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2 posted 2003-06-25 04:25 PM


nicely thought,,,  and expressed...

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


Ericc
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3 posted 2003-06-25 05:11 PM


Very moving.
Eric

martina
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4 posted 2003-06-25 08:29 PM


YO well thought out keeping writing u are good


          MARTINA

Hockeychick19
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5 posted 2003-06-25 09:28 PM


Thank you all for your kind words. The world as we know it has a lot of unknowns.

~Kelly~

timothysangel1973
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6 posted 2003-06-26 01:50 AM


"Don’t save me,
Enslave me."     Very powerful words there!

I really liked it!

passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-06-26 01:52 AM


very touching writing
Hockeychick19
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8 posted 2003-06-26 08:13 AM


Thank you Timothysangel1973 and Passing Shadows I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-)

(((hugs)))
~Kelly~

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9 posted 2009-09-07 12:07 PM


Very tender write, sad.


ARCTIC WIND

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