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All That Remains...to dixie...ty
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All That Remains...to dixie...ty |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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All That Remains you have such a way to bring to surface tears that lay in the back... I too have such a hard time holding on to my heart... yet I find I now clutch it all too tightly finding death in the giving and in the keeping to where all that remains is sorrow |
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idleeyes86 Member
since 2003-06-09
Posts 64Somewhere over the rainbow |
Sad and beautiful as always, I particularly enjoyed the first few lines up to the first ... Everybody hurts, take comfort in your friends, cos everybody hurts sometimes |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Awesome. You display a rare empathy...in such beautiful form. Eric |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
This to shall pass. Such a kind gift this is... If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Oh Helen, this is so beautifully sad, such melancholy we share. I'm not sure if making you cry is a thing to be proud of, but touching you is. I love you like a sister and we will both make it through and someday we will be happy and share that  Thank you for this write, one to go to my library and keep forever. You touch my heart, every day. |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Oh how I ache for the pain that you feel. Much pain lies in my heart, and writing is all that helps it go away. Though I was able to escape the horrid pain of my life, it will never wash away because there are thousands of tears inside that I was never allowed to cry. Thank you for your poetry! It is beautiful and heart touching. Tima C. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
had to read again |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
how tender and wonderful, to thank someone for the touch of a heart |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
this too shall pass... a wonderful write and a wonderful tribute.  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
God Helen - this is beautiful you are on a roll missy and with ya on this Dixie has kept me sane many many nights . . . xxoo |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Sorrow never read so well, or so forlorn. I too have such a hard time holding on to my heart... This is as sad as it is beautiful~ Go easy on your heart Helen. Hugs Dixie~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Helen, this is such a loving write for our sweet Dixie. Thank you for sharing this.  Hugs to you both Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-20-2003 01:08 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love all of your replies! love it, just love these people! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
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