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Mollie963
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0 posted 2003-06-17 02:44 PM


The Light leaves
Impatience imprinted
On the wall
Where you directed your
Blinding Intentions.


[This message has been edited by Mollie963 (06-17-2003 04:05 PM).]

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skyshine
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Beneath the northern stars
1 posted 2003-06-17 04:15 PM


You said a lot in a few words....sometimes things can leave remnants like that. Well done.

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

Mollie963
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2 posted 2003-06-17 05:35 PM


thanks much the feedback! glad you  liked it... appreciate it!
Margherita
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Eternity
3 posted 2003-06-18 11:07 AM


You imprinted your poem on my mind.
An image forms and it is of Light.
Lovely!
Margherita

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Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2008-02-22 07:12 PM


Yes You did, A lot in just little words!

Wonderfully written!

ARCTIC WIND

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