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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-06-17 02:40 PM

You Write Me

what hand
have you
that when I
am stirred
one touch
can calm
fears are things
that lined
my past
distant now
in a memory
gently traced
sensation of power
in this
unselfish gift
that gives
not takes
content now
in this signature
within soft
stroke of ink
I find
my center

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2003-06-17 03:38 PM

OneSlickLady~
You write in softest whisper of ink~
Beautiful~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

2 posted 2003-06-17 06:49 PM

L-a-r-r-y

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

[This message has been edited by Larry C (06-17-2003 06:51 PM).]

Broken
Member

since 2000-03-12

Posts 271
The woods

3 posted 2003-06-17 07:14 PM

I like the way you write, short and to the point. Enjoyed.

~Broken~

Such griefs with such men well agree,
But wherefore, wherefore fall on me ?
To be beloved is all I need,
And whom I love, I love indeed.

S.T.C

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-06-18 05:26 AM

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-06-18 09:12 AM

Helen:
yesssssssss
much solace indeed
which you so deserve
xxoo

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2003-06-18 09:27 AM

A fine, calming hand,
indeed...

thank you Helen, for this
treat...

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

7 posted 2003-06-18 09:50 AM

Beautiful write Helen - thanks - Paul

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2003-06-18 07:17 PM

enjoyed

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

9 posted 2003-06-18 09:51 PM

one touch
can calm
fears are things
that lined
my past
distant now
in a memory

That kind of writing can only be done by the most kind and caring hand. *S* I like this very much... it's beautiful! *S*

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

10 posted 2003-06-18 10:00 PM

Helen, breathtaking if I must say so. Goodness! It's wonderful!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

joyfull girl
Junior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 15

11 posted 2003-06-18 10:34 PM

in so few words you have created such beauty
amazing
-Joy

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

12 posted 2003-06-18 10:39 PM

Ah absolutely beautiful..the writing too..grins

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

13 posted 2008-02-23 11:06 AM

Very Poetic I think! lol

ARCTIC WIND

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