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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-06-17 02:24 PM



Tone Or Pulse

I pull
in all
the lines
that have
come undone
in loss
of connection
and all
that’s left
is clear
sadness ringing

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (06-17-2003 02:31 PM).]

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Ericc
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1 posted 2003-06-17 03:26 PM


Again...such pure beauty.
Eric

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2003-06-17 04:23 PM


OneSlickLady~
Achingly beautiful~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Larry C
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3 posted 2003-06-17 06:45 PM


Here's to getting a new connection...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2003-06-17 07:21 PM


perfect

M

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
5 posted 2003-06-18 05:26 AM


sigh
Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15
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6 posted 2003-06-18 09:53 AM


Helen - wow how much you say in a few words - Paul
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
7 posted 2003-06-18 10:01 AM


Helen:

ahhhh I hear this sadness as well
Shut off the ringer . . .
xxoo

Artic Wind
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8 posted 2008-02-22 05:52 PM


Very Perfect indeed

ARCTIC WIND

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