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timothysangel1973
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0 posted 2003-06-17 01:55 PM


If you don't ask,
I won't tell,
of all my nights in a living hell.

If you don't search,
you won't find,
the demons hiding in my mind.

If you don't reach,
you won't touch,
the place that needs your love so much.

If you can't see,
I won't show,
the place that aches each time you go.

If you don't ask,
I won't say,
Why I'm afraid you'll go away.

If you don't look,
beyond my lies,
you won't see the truth,
In my eyes.

If you can't see,
I won't share,
all the pain,
hiding there.

If you don't push,
you'll never find,
the damaged part,
of my mind.

If you hold me close,
I can pretend,
that this feeling I have,
will never end.

If you could promise to never leave,
finally my heart will feel releived.

If you can't,
I'll never know,
The love my heart,
has to show.

Ask me now,
and I will share,
this and more,
that's hidden there.


If you cant get rid of the skeletons in your closet, you'd best teach them how to dance.  George Bernard Shaw

[This message has been edited by timothysangel1973 (06-17-2003 01:56 PM).]

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Nan
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1 posted 2003-06-17 08:18 PM


This is lovely - Let's take it for another round...
Sunshine
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2 posted 2003-06-17 08:45 PM



And another round....

visitvenus
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since 2002-12-30
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3 posted 2003-06-18 12:39 PM


Back to the top!
topsyturveychick
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since 2003-01-19
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4 posted 2003-06-18 12:47 PM


Great poem mate.  I think I'll read this one again...and again...and again.

I asked God how much he loved me...
He said this much...
And streched out his arms and Died.

**Sunshine**

vlraynes
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5 posted 2003-06-18 12:50 PM



This is beautiful.  I enjoyed the read.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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6 posted 2003-06-18 12:56 PM


very nice good write

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


pisumnux
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since 2003-06-11
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Troy, NY
7 posted 2003-06-18 12:59 PM


beautiful....i loved it and i know many who can relate

If it weren't for my horse...

timothysangel1973
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8 posted 2003-06-18 03:06 AM


THANK YOU ALL Soooooooooo MUCH!!

YOU ALL MAKE ME FEEL SO SPECIAL!

THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU!!!!

Tima C.

passing shadows
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9 posted 2003-06-18 04:15 AM


just a wonderful write! such pouring of yourself!
Artic Wind
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10 posted 2008-02-21 02:45 PM


Enjoyed the Write!

ARCTIC WIND

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