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From Allah's Garden to Persia a final letter

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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 06-17-2003 12:59 PM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Cpat Hair


My husband,
I did not chose the time to leave you
It was in trying to give you the child
We both so desired as part of our life
That Allah decided to grace me with death
And leave you behind to endure.

You were always a gentle strength to me
And since  I have been gone I know
It was the strength inside you
And the memories of our love
That sustained you.

I am proud to have been yours
And danced mornings on dew
With nothing between you and I
But the air we breathed as we  were
Surrounded as if in incense by the joy
True love brings to mortal souls

I await your arrival
But do not rush my Dear
There is an eternity to share in this place
And we had but a few short seasons there
In the Persia of our birth to remember
And I would not have you hurry to leave
Just to be with me. Instead,
I ask you to look with your slow rove of eye
On the landscapes we shared
And I
In the night will come and sit by your bed
Touching your brow with cool
Again feeling
The desires of Earth

Allah is kind
   But you my Husband
        Are my love

Fear not
I wait for only you
Even here
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1 posted 06-17-2003 01:11 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I am proud to have been yours
And danced mornings on dew
With nothing between you and I
But the air we breathed as we  were
Surrounded as if in incense by the joy
True love brings to mortal souls

When I desperately need to read beauty, I'll return here... This is just magnificent.
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 06-17-2003 01:14 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Cpat,
A wonderful write, enjoyed.
Patricia
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3 posted 06-17-2003 01:27 PM       View Profile for Patricia   Email Patricia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Patricia

Ron,
The tears briefly dried. And then you choose to grace us again.  Of this verse there were not simply warm tears falling soft upon the keys, but rather outcries from my soul.  

Yes, yes...I can revisit this place you have taken me.  And I shall, my Sorcerer, I shall.

Patricia
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I await your arrival
But do not rush my Dear
There is an eternity to share in this place
And we had but a few short seasons there
In the Persia of our birth to remember
And I would not have you hurry to leave
Just to be with me. Instead,
I ask you to look with your slow rove of eye
On the landscapes we shared
And I
In the night will come and sit by your bed
Touching your brow with cool
Again feeling
The desires of Earth

Allah is kind
   But you my Husband
        Are my love

Fear not
I wait for only you
Even here

~*~

You've got to admire a willing,
waiting, spirit...

Never say never...

Janet Marie
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5 posted 06-17-2003 03:25 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

any body ever tell ya your good...
youre reaaally good.... ;squeeze:
Susan Caldwell
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6 posted 06-25-2003 03:37 PM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

I missed this one...

Beautiful

Susan
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7 posted 06-25-2003 03:43 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

I can't believe I missed this one!!
Beautiful..romantic..very touching.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

Martie
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8 posted 06-25-2003 04:47 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Ron...This is very touching!
Midnitesun
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9 posted 06-25-2003 04:50 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

lucky for me, someone unearthed this near-buried-treasure

Magnus
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10 posted 06-25-2003 05:30 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

Ron,  maybe I should have you do the Eulogy
for my death,  when that time comes.  

Excellent write.  Thanx...you sound good
as a woman...(just kiddin')

Lots of feelings written into this tender
write of love.
Artic Wind
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11 posted 03-24-2009 04:35 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

I agree with Sunshine on this one ~Enjoyed this deeply


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