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Prophecy, Part 2 (Duet: Sunshine & Patricia)
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Prophecy, Part 2 (Duet: Sunshine & Patricia) |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri 
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Prophecy, Part 2 Summer’s heat hung heavy her heart humidity's drudge, weighty, like a blood-filled mosquito's buzz in nocturnal air. Tossed and turned once cool, crisp bed sheets crumpled now into soiled sorrow, She, Sleepless soothed not by ethereal wisps of night vision, desiring only a exacting touch of flesh Heeds only in this sore heart, a slight, faintest whisper of obscure midnight streets Beckoning her to walk an avenue’s dark lane in soul search where prophecy awaits, wanting to be fulfilled. Slipping sandals and shawl around a thin frame she'll walk the avenue called Horizon and will meet a crimson dawn alone. For destiny is light. As if a moth spirit, she canvasses streets window gazing, peering for his incarnate soul. Stealing glances into light of lovers and lonely hearts waiting to hear the muffled scratching of his pen almost dry, knowing she alone holds the ink, she, Undiscouraged, unyielding, shall again discover prophecy's light, His light his touch his words. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling)..OK..worth the wait.... well done you two... now, where is part 3? it surely does not end here on this note of unknown and undecided... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Honestly, Dear Karilea & Patricia, for what it is worth, I am VERY impressed with your illustrious collaboration! You wrote exceptionally well together, and I DEMAND a part 3! Oh, my! Aren't I the mouthy one!(JM--that was "mouthy" not "mothy"!)  Warm morning hugs to you both! Linda |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Slipping sandals and shawl around a thin frame she'll walk the avenue called Horizon and will meet a crimson dawn alone. For destiny is light. As if a moth spirit, she canvasses streets window gazing, peering for his incarnate soul. Stealing glances into light of lovers and lonely hearts waiting to hear the muffled scratching of his pen almost dry, knowing she alone holds the ink, =============================== well you already know the moth is smiling.. and basking in the light and warmth of this lovely write. Enjoy the high and inspire this duet is gifting and we will reap the fruits of your labor of love. LOL@at LOUD LINDA  Theres always room for more moths  |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Loved it! Fantastic. home, home, where I wanted to go |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
yet again love it... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Slipping sandals and shawl around a thin frame she'll walk the avenue called Horizon Patricia and Karilea, you've done it again! An excellent Part 2... now waiting for part 3. Maree |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful blending of spirits and talented pens... Can't wait for number three... this is wonderful! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ladies, this is a beautiful blend of mystery and yearning....done so well that even I have difficulty discerning which is what... Yes, mayhaps a part 3... I think so... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mayhap a Part 3, Magnus? But of course. Patricia and I are having too much fun NOT to have a Part 3. Thanks, everyone, for enjoying this along with us! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Beautiful job you guys knowing she alone holds the ink yes yes indeed . . . xxoo |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice - You two work beautifully together...  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Particia and Karilea...Enjoying these so much...very beautifully done! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Karilea & Patricia, My favorite movie is "Dream a Little Dream". Oh how I love the telling of this dream. Such an awesome duet! I'm so grateful there is more.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Beckoning her to walk an avenue’s dark lane in soul search where prophecy awaits, wanting to be fulfilled" ...you know...this is awesome |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Astounding write, thank you for sharing such an awesome creation. My best....Lee J. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is beautiful, Ladies. I thouroughly enjoyed reading.  Ethel |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
So as the number one fan of this series I am offering the following links in order to expedite even more responses. Prophecy - Part 1 Prophecy - Part 3 Prophecy - Part 4 Prophecy - Part 5 If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I haven't came across the first one yet (excited by the way)!!! Great elegant Penning! ARCTIC WIND |
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